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| I really appreciate all your efforts & time. Thanks for your comments.
nijamE spellings correct chesuko valasina avasaramu vumdi kaadananu
( telugu lo anukOni English lo Teipu chesE sarikE nA kuvunna koddipaaTi samayam eipotumdi einaa mIsUchana mannimchataginadE
ika Seili amTaaraa eamadhyE chelam gaaru anna voka kaamenTu chadivaa
' Sei li Sei li ani paTTuku eDustaaru emduku
nenu emiraaSaano gamanimchamDi ani - chalam '
ika naa gurimchi
- nenu kavini kaadu
- nenu e kavitvam chadavalEdu -
- naabhaada vEru - naa raata naabhaada gurimchE
- naa profilE naa bhaada
- chukka lu , ahcharyaalu amTaara avi naabhaa , chadive vaariki aalochananu pemchaalanE
maLLi vokkasaari - naa ku telusu nenu kavini kaadu
naa bhaada veru - naa Seili kaadu nenu emiraaSaano gamanimchamDi -
Thanks for reading this comment -
Here is the link, regarding Chalam comment - please read the article completely
http://www.andhrajyothy.com/editshow.asp?qry=/2005/sep/19vividha3
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 27, Sep 2005 7:17:11 PM IST
nuvvEmI rivarsu gEreyyalEdulE abbAy .ippuDu raiT TrAkulOkE vochchAv .
achchutappula gurinchi abbAyi sUchana pATinchAlsindE
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 27, Sep 2005 5:39:52 PM IST
abbayyA profaillO evaLLu yEvi rAsukonnArannadi nAkanavasaram .manam mATTADutOndi kavitvam gurinchi.kavitvamlO peTTE kwaSchan mArksu, AScharyArthakAla gurinchi.anchAta Iyana profaillO yEvundO nAkanavasaram
ihapOtE kavula bAgOgula gurinchi.allAnTi gurilEkanDA vimarSinchanDam telivitakkuvadanam .evarni vimarSinchinA tappulu diddukOnDani cheppAnE gAnI DIgrED aipOnDani cheppalEdE.sO tamaru gUDA konchem sariggA AlOchinchE pani beTTukonTE mElu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 27, Sep 2005 4:49:57 PM IST
idO abbAyI kappadATlU mEkadATlU veyyamAka alavATu lEka bOrlApaDEvu.akkaDekkaDO O peddAyanaku intapoDugu lekcharichchAvugA 'yAsa mATlADitE dOshamA?' ani.bhAshaku 'yAsa' ellA vunTundO prati rachaitakU vaLLade aina 'Saili' vunTundi.kAkapOtE andulO 'merugu peTTAlsinavi', 'merugulavasaram lEnivi' ani renDu rakAlunTAyi.ippuDu mana saiTulO chUstE praNav ku, kiraN kumAr gAriki, mUlA subramaNyam gAriki Sailini diddAlsina panilEdu. gAnI rivaiv jIki, viplav jIki, sphUrti SrIlEkhajIki, jagannAtham gAriki diddukOvAlsina avasaram konchemundi.af kOrs adi vALLa ishTam pai AdhArapaDivunTundi.arthavaindA ?
ihapOtE I kavitalO kwaSchan mArkulu, AScharyArthakAle peTTochchugA annAvu jUDu dAniki nI mIda jAli paDutunnA.yEdi yeppuDu yellA vADAlO telInappuDu kavitvam rAyaDam kudardu.telisinanta mErA rAsEdantA kavitvam kAkapOyinA yEdi autundi yEdi kAdu anna vishayam telisostundi.dInni goppa kavita ani analEdE.rivaiv jI rAsina mundari kavitalakanTE idi konchem sUTigAnU, saraLangAnU vundi.tIsukonna vishayam pAtadEainA prejenTEshan bAgundi.nAlugu kavitalu bAgA rAyalEdanna mAtrAnA inkeppuDU rAyakanDA pOtArEmiTi? rAyanappuDu rAyalEdani rAsinappuDu rAsArani oppukonTE tappEmundi? vimarSakulanTE jOkarlu gAru lollAy mATalu mATlADDAniki. kavi bAgOgulni manasupeTTi pariSIlinchaDamE vALLa modaTi kartavyam .
iha AndhrAjI vishayam .Ayana viSlEshaNallO konni bAgunnAy .konni Ayana kavitallAnE vintagA vunTAy .kAnI OpikagA, sutimettagA cheppE dhOraNi mechchukOdaggadi.lEkapOtE nuvvu nI buDDI dOstU kalisi chEsina allarini Ayana gAbaTTi bharinchAru.arthavaindA ?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 24, Sep 2005 7:39:41 AM IST
Aandhrudu mI praSnaki Vastav samaadhaanam correct and
anumaanam + AScharyam = aalochana anEtalaputo peTTinavE
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 22, Sep 2005 6:31:00 PM IST
TaiTillO avunA anna padam kanTE ! ? gurtulE kIlakamainavi.AScharyam anumAnam renDU kalagalasipOyi avunA ayyindi.antEnA rivav jI
mI mundari kavitalakanTE indulO yentO tEDA vundi.mI Sailini mArchAru.bAgundi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 22, Sep 2005 1:58:49 PM IST
TaiTil alaa enduku peTTa valasi vachchindoa?
but its a gud writing and style is also appreciable sir keep it up !Tel
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 22, Sep 2005 12:36:50 PM IST
avunu I kavitalO atiSayOkti lEdanukoMTunnAnu
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 22, Sep 2005 10:54:51 AM IST
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