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Articles: Poetry | | aaSa | |
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| I really mean it.
1) RaghottamaRao
2) Mr. Vastav Alok
3) Vimarsak
From Mula and Kiran etc..
Learn some thing out of their comments.
Thanks again -
- indrudu returns please stop this kind of comments.
At the same time naa ku kavini anipimchukOvaalani ledu , nenu emiraaSaanO chUDamdi
Please read american manogatam and comment.
Again for TYPOS ... I don't have that much time to rectify ... but point to be noted :-)
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 28, Sep 2005 10:11:18 PM IST
annaTTu rivaivjI inkO karekshan sushkinchi gAdu Sushkinchi anunDAli.
idO indruDU nI TAlenTuku nA arikAlu gUDA riyAkshanivvadani chepitE maLLI gunDela mIda cheyyeTTukOvaDamenduku?
praNav modalainavALLu allA yenduku jEsAranTE nI sOdi nunchi tappinchukODAniki.ninnu tiTTAranukO gODa mIdi sunnAnni gOkinaTTE, kanTlO paDutundi.anchAta vALLu telivigA tappinchukonnAru.dAnni jUsi nuvvEdO mahA TAlenTuku mallE chankalu guddukonTunnAv .mEmu kAmenTlatO jAnAlni yEDipinchinaTTaitE IrOju rivavjI vimarSak ku allA thAnks cheppEvAru gAdu.I rOju chAlAmandi kavitvam gurinchi konchemannA avagAhana techchukonEvALLu gAdu.anchAta nI TAlenTuni panilEni pAThakuDikO, vedhava indruDikO chUpinchu appuDu telisostundi asalu pasa
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Sep 2005 9:23:39 PM IST
OhO allAgA.
yEdi yEvainA vokka vishayam cheppukOvAli rivaivjI.mIru modaTlO rAsina tIrukU ippuDu rAstunna tIruku chAlAnE tEDA vundi.A mArpu kUDA chakkagA vundi.vimarSak cheppinaTTu inkonchem Sraddha peTTanDi mundu mundu tappakanDA manchi kavitalu rAstAru.mIrEvanukOnanTE indruDikkUDA indulOnE javAbu rAsEstA
idO indruDU nIdI voha TAlenTEnA ? yEdO kODipunju gontunu nokkAvu gadA TAlenTu vEshTu jEsukOkani chepitE nuvvu jEsindEviTi? chillukunDaku kallukunDa, chal chal guLLAniki adE pErutO pEraDIlu barakaDavEgA ?kanipinchina pratokkaLLanU ankul bAbAy akkAyanTU sOdi veyyaDavEgA?idoha TAlenTani nuvvanukonTE ellA vunTundanTE sIlingu fyAnunu TEbul mIdeTTukOvalanna prayatnamlA vunTundi.nI vIra bODi TAlenTuki nAku kaDupu kAlaDam kAdu gadA arikAllO durada kUDA puTTadu.anchAta nI kochchaningulu ApEsi ikkaDinunchi uruku lEkapOtE panilEni pAThakannO, bUtula bungammO vostAru ninnu lagettistAru.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Sep 2005 9:04:08 PM IST
nenu amTe aaSa -
nIvu amTe manishi
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 28, Sep 2005 8:45:30 PM IST
rivaivjI
I kavita gurinchi mI mATallOnE vinAlani vundi.ikkaDa 'nIvu' anTE evaru ?nEnu anTE evaru?
nEnEmO nIvu anTE manishani, nEnu anTE manasani artham cheyyabOyA gAnI adi kudarlEdu
idO indruDabbAy akkaDa buradalO dorlAvu sarE ikkaDochchi dulupukOvaDavEmiTi.bEga uruku
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Sep 2005 8:43:05 PM IST
my thoughts lo vEyamannaa Ti . pi vaaLLanu but they posted in Poetry - nEnu kavini anipimchukOvaali anE korika lEdu -- einaa emduku raastunnanu amTe
To tell or express my feelings -
And at the same time I appreciate your suggestions Vimarsaka - Your comments really helped me. I will try to improve ... tiragali , raachapumDu pada prayOgam naakE vimtagaa vunnayi
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 28, Sep 2005 8:14:15 PM IST
Agree 200% with you Sastry Gaaru
mIru Edeinaa sUchimchamDi ...
kOrika elaavumTumdi amTaaru ?
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 28, Sep 2005 6:55:43 PM IST
kavita vEdAMta paraMgA bAguMdi
kAkapOtE makuTaM (ASa) saripOyiMdA ani anumAnaM
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 28, Sep 2005 6:49:43 PM IST
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