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Articles: Poetry | | paTTu purugu gUDu | |
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| gud that u hv introduced a new site called betterphoto.com.thanx for letting me know that they too hv a discussion forum where ppl r interacting with each other & there is a section called as constructive photo critiques where ppl r telling their feelings straightly. for example
http://www.betterphoto.com/forms/Discussiondetail.asp?threadID=318896
so ur suggestion of introducing rating system of poems has been vetoed by this site's discussion forum & critique corner
anchAta manakEdi anukUlangA vunTundO adE mATlADakanDA andarikI vupayOgapaDE vidhangA vunTE mElu.
ihapOtE iravainAlugganTAlU sunnitangA vimarSinchanDi anna paDikaTTu mATa vini visugEstOndi.yE mAtram TAlenTu vunnA mechchukoDamlO nEnu gAnI vimarSak gAnI mundu varasalO vunTAm .panikimAlina plIjing bijines nAku chEta kAdu.ippaTikainA arthavaindA?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 30, Sep 2005 8:11:18 PM IST
peda baabaaY , kondaru vupayOgam paDindi anavachchu , anta kantE ekkuva mandi cheppE vidAnam mArchukO magaDaa ani cheppa ledA , neeku nachchutE cheppu , nachchaka potE suniSitamgA cheppaTAniki neeku vachchE ibbandi emiTi ? enduku edO telugu meeda abhimAnam tO , vrAsevAlla vusuru pOsukovaTam ? andukE , ekkaDO , indruDu annaaDu , meeru mAraru ani Anyway I am leaving for vacation for a month. Will visit you in a month.
Posted by: Mr. Musugu veerudu At: 30, Sep 2005 7:25:07 PM IST
sina baabaaY , neelO naaku nachchE di adE , mundununDi okE tALam , nEnE pistA nani , nuvvu edO pedda peddO LLa pErlu cheppAvu , andulo kAmESwara Sarma gAru , suniSitam gaa vimarSinsanDayyA moguLLU ani seppAru kadA, adi entavaraku pATinchavO cheppu? ikkaDa vunna janAlE vedhavalu , nEnu mAtram mArAlsina pani lEdu anukontE cheppEdi emundi cheppu !.
ika comments system gurinchi internet lO chUstE fine arts forums vATinE vADutunnaTlu anipichindi example: betterphoto.com etc. adi nuvvu ishTa paDavani naaku telusu. pichchi kavitvaalu vraayaDam ela vyasanamO , janaala meeda geDDalu vEyaTam kUDa alAnTidE , vUrlO rachchabanDa meeda chEriayinaa , internet forums lO ayinaa , (Don't ask me how I know!!) andukE nEnu alaa annaanu. But anyway let us see what T.P. board will do , probably nothing , because more hits, better rating for them , right?
Posted by: Mr. Musugu veerudu At: 30, Sep 2005 7:14:05 PM IST
musugu vIruDU
oppukODAniki yevarainA sariggA vAdistE gadA?yevarainA siddhAntaparangA mIdi tappu ani nirUpistEga?allA vAdanaku nilabaDindi kallUri gArokkarE.gAnI vAru kUDA chivarlO mA payanTlanE oppukonnAru.kAvAlanTE Ayana kavitallOkeLLi chUDu.
iha SAstrigAri gurinchi.Ayana paTla nAkellAnTi vyaktigata dwEsham lEdE.abhiprAya bhEdamunnadallA kavitvamanTE yEviTi anna vishayam paTla.prati kavitanI vimarSinchEkanTE mI dRushTilO kavitvamanTE yEviTO cheppanDani aDigindi AyanE.mEmu vyAsam rAstE dAnipaTla ellAnTi abhiprAyam cheppakapOyindI AyanE.paipechchu kavitva paitya prakOpam llAnTi kavitalu rAsindI AyanE.Ayana mechchukonna nA kavita vokaTE vokaTi.kallUrigAru nA vokka kavitakU kAmenTu rAyalEdu.anchAta nA kavitanu mechchukonnAru ganaka vILLani nEnu mechchukOvAla, tiTTAru gAbaTTi tiragabaDi tiTTAlanna buddhi nAku lEdu.andari kavitalanI vimarSinchina nEnu vimarSala kOsamanE kavitalni ikkaDa rAsAnu.gAnI yendulOnU evvarU charchinchalEdu.'adi' kavitalO vokka AndhrAjI tappa.andulO jarigina charcha yenta rasavattarangA vundO ohasAri chadivi chUDu telustundi.
na cha Sabda gADhA:
na cha nigama chaturA:
Sabda gADhata gAdu pAndityamanTE.chaturata gAdu pAnDityamanTE.allAgE kavitvam gUDA.kavita rAyani rOjuna nAku ukkapaDutundi anna prakRuti pilupullAnTi rOjuvArI leveluku telugu kavitvam digajAripOyindi.kavitvamoka jIvakaLa.kAnI prastutam adi chAvukaLatO vundi.kommulu tirigina, talalu panDina vALLa kanTE kottavALLanE merugupeTTaDam mElani ikkaDa kAmenTs rAyaDam jarugutundi.nEnu vimarSak tolidaSalO chEsina kAmenTs ikkaDivALLani kudipinAyi.viparItamaina vyatirEkata modalaindi.rOjukO tiTTukavitvam rAyaDam konasAgindi.avAkulu chevAkulu kArukUtalU annI naDichAyi.gAnI vITi madhyana manchi charchalu jarigAyi.gAnI sensEshan&sukE alavATu paDDa prANAlu goDavalakE moggu jUpAyigAnI sisalaina charchalaki gAdu.anchAta uttinE mAvaipu vEletti chUpinchaku.migilina mUDu vELLU nI vaipU vunTAy .ohavELa mottam aidu vELLanU nI vaipu chUyistAnannAvanukO appuDadi yEmautundO nuvvE AlOchinchukO
chivaragA kAmEnTlanu tIseyyaDam gurinchi. .inDiyaTaim&s saiTulO ammAyila bommalaku peTTina rETing sisTamllAnTi sisTam ikkaDi kavitalakeDitE nashTapOyEdi kavulE
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 30, Sep 2005 4:44:00 PM IST
peda baabaaY ,
This is my proposal to you and T.P. editors, lets get rid of this ridiculous comments system and let the T.P. readers just rate the poetry .
If somebody like you want to contribute in 'your own way' , let us start another forum and discuss / analyse the poetry.
This way people like you and me who have nothing else to do other than hurting others, don't spoil the environment over here.
What do you say?
Posted by: Mr. Musugu veerudu At: 30, Sep 2005 4:03:08 PM IST
sina baabaaY , ' naa vaadana lO , lOpamunTE oppukonTaanu ' annavu , nee Ti. pi. jeevitam lO , alaa oppukonnadi okkasaari ayinaa chUpistaavaa ?
ika Saastri gaaru , nee tavikalanu mechchukonTuu kaamenTs vraayaledenTi? aayana cheppE daanTlO paayanTu vundani oppukOvachchukadaa, ikkaDa neekanTe, peda baabaaY kanTE , aayana goppODu ani oppukonE vaallu chaalaa mandE vunnaaru ,
entamandi cheppinaa meeru maaraTlE danE , aayana alaa vraastunnarEmO nani enduku grahincharu.
Posted by: Mr. Musugu veerudu At: 30, Sep 2005 3:58:36 PM IST
Very Good.
ika nunchayina manchi vimarSalu raavaalani kOrukundaam
Posted by: Mr. Rambabu K At: 30, Sep 2005 12:59:20 PM IST
nijavE.A kAmenTlaki rAmbAbu bAdhapaDDAru.in bAksukO meyil pampAru.nAku rAsina meyillO Ayana annadi
'ikkaDa vachchina kavitalni chadivi nEnu nA kavitalni pampAnu.saiTu vAru yAksepTu jEsAru gAbaTTi vATilni kavitalugAnE bhAvistAnu.mIru vyangyangA kAkanDA nA kavitvamlOni lOpAlu chepitE bAgunDEdi'
dIniki nE ichchina riplai AyanE vachchi chepitE bAgunTundi.yendukanTE nEnEm cheppinA kalpitam anE avakASam vundi.
peyyETigArinI, puTrEvu gArinI kshaminchanu ani indruDu DiklarEshan ichchinaTTugAnE telisO teliyakO kavitvAnni apahAsyam pAlu jEstE nEnU kshaminchEdi lEdu.
peddavAru SAstrigArini vEdhinchAmannAru.mA pai Ayanakenta dwEsham vundO vAri lETeshTu rachana idi peLLikUturu gAdu lO telustUnE vundi.AyanagAru tammuDU anipilchE kallUrigAritO nEnu, vimarSakuDu chEsina charchalu mIrevvarU chUDalEdEmO.krAnti krAnti gAritO nE vAdinchina tIruni gUDA mIru chUDalEdEmO.kAmESwara Sarma gAritO jarigina mA vAdanalanU nuvvu chUDalEdEmO.rivaiv inDiya gAriki Ayana kavitvamlOnu, vAdanalOnu lOpAlanu chUpinchina vishayAnni gUDA chUDalEdEmO.saumya, praSanti, sItU prEmAnjali, SrIdhar , viplav , jagannAtharAv illA yE konchem manchi kavita rAsinA manaspoortigA mechchukonnAm .nannu gADida anna vAritO saitam mAmUlugAnE unnA.mAtO vAdinchalEka akkasutO mApai tiTTu kavitalu rAsina SAstrigAri rachanallO konninTini nachchAyani kAmenTu rAsA.peyyETi gAri chirapravAsi prANamlO modaTlO Ayannu mechchukonnA gAnI A tarvAta Ayana vyavahAra rIti ellA mAripOyindO nIkU telusu.
allAgE rivaiv gAri kavitalO gUDA nIku cheppAnu I saiTulO sonta Saili vunnavALLu evarO, evaru Sailini diddukOvAlO.nE cheppinadAnTlO lOpAlunTE praSninchanDani gAnI tiTTu kavitalenduku rAyaDam ? vitanDa vAdamenduku chEyaDam ?kavitvam gurinchi evvaru yE praSna vEsina samAdhAnamivvaDAniki nE reDI.gAnI nE vEsina praSnalaku nAku samAdhAnAlu doraku gadA tiTTlu dorukutAy.
mIriddarU nannu aDDukOvAlani chEsina prayatnAlani antE spOrTiv gA yedurkonnA.mIru lEvanettina praSnallO yekkaDa pAyanTuvunnA dAniki nA eksplanEshan ichchA.vILLu ishTam gAbaTTi mechchukunTA vALLu nachcharu kAbaTTi tiDatA anaDAniki idEm pAliTiks gAdu.nAku kAvalsindi manchi kavitvam .adi evvaru rAsinA manaspoortigA mechchukonTAnu.allAgE nA vAdanalO lOpamunTE kachchitangA oppukonTAnu.vitanDa vAdanaku pOnu.
anchAta rAmbAbu cheppindE pATiddAm .nA vAdanalO lOpamundanukO nuvvU vAdinchu.A vadanatO voka lAjikal kan klUshanku voddAm .chadivE nalugurikI vupayOgamunDETTu mana vAdanni diddudAm .
lOpam evarilO vunnA lOpamE.allAgE pratibha kUDA.kaliyugamlO janAlu 'dOsha grAhi, guNASlAghI'lai vunTArani garuDa purANam cheputundi.dAnni konchem mArchi 'dOshAgrAhI, guNa SlAghI'laudAm
iha I lEnipOni vivAdAlu, vitanDavAdAlu chAlu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 30, Sep 2005 12:07:59 PM IST
asalu baabaayiliddaruu kUDaa okarE ani naa anumaanam !
edEmainaa indranna nuvvu maLLI raavaala ILLa pogaranachaDaaniki. ni sTaillO nuvvellu. peLLaalu aiDIlO vastE appuDu nE chUsukunTa !
Posted by: Mr. Shanmugam D At: 30, Sep 2005 9:33:16 AM IST
bUtu rAtalaki antamO , inTlO, veedhilO kUDa gurtimpu lEka ikkaDa janaala meeda vaalipOye ahamkaarapu pichchOllaku aarambhamO, kaalamE cheppaali.
mottaaniki indruDu debbaki, baabaaY lalO okaru 'indrudi pellam ' (i.d.) avvaalsi vachchindemO ani naa anumaanam , EmanTaav baabaaY !
Posted by: Mr. Musugu veerudu At: 30, Sep 2005 9:09:36 AM IST
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