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Articles: My Thoughts | | Oka Mahila Manasu...(Please Listen) | |
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| the 1st one i liked here, is, the picture u kept.
the child looks very cute and her angel wings makes her a divine thing.
and immediately i hated u, for keeping such a bad title for this one.
The words werre not about any "female's heart". the essence is about sharing problems, of anyone, gender is nowhere mentioned in it. And to such a beautiful one, u gave a polish of feminsim with ur title.
I dont understand y always women live so insecured about thier exisatance, that they want to emphasise about thie gender always. Dont u feel that this article looked wonderful if thetitle doesnt contain that word "mahila"??
And finally, when u are giving the works of someone else,mentionthe name of author in the beginningitself, so that readers will have an impression about what they r reading.
for example, while reading this, iwas amused with the english usage, but irritated with excessive puntuations, anyhow i started likingu , thinking that all these words from ur own thoughts, but when i came to end, all of a sudden i saw someone else'sname, and iam very disappointed.
ok, miss, i said all these, and if u feel that there is any meaning in me, plz changein the way of writing,
but, plz dont think that iam giving advice for u, i am just expressing my opinion.
to listen, or not, is up to u.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 1, Apr 2003 11:49:19 AM IST
hey.. really worth reading.
Posted by: Narendra Pratap Raju At: 25, Mar 2003 11:56:04 AM IST
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