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Articles: Poetry | | aalayakOnETiki aDuguna... | |
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| i too feel that expressions in this poem should be sharper.. anyway i will try to improve on that...
thanks to everyone..
Posted by: PRANAV At: 2, Nov 2005 2:15:54 PM IST
'aalayakOnEru' anEkaMTE 'kOvelakOnEru' aMTE koMcheM baaguMDEdEmO?
'aalaya' saMskRutaM maaTa. 'kOnEru' telugu maaTa. reMDiMTinee kalipitE 'adhikachakkani ('aarudra' kaavaalani vaaDi, 'baagaa chESaanu' anukunna samaasaM)', 'Sunakapillalu', 'sunaayanamma' vale uMTuMdi. mahaakavulu iTuvaMTivaaTini akkaDakkaDa vaaDaarugaanee, idi EmaMta SrEshThapaddhati kaadu. (okkO maaTa 'vaalakaM'lOnE adi saMskRutapu maaTO, telugu maaTO telisipOtooMTuMdi.)
bhaavaaniki praamukhyaM ivvaMDi. appuDu baagaa vastuMdi kavita.
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 30, Oct 2005 1:14:44 AM IST
ippaTiki 8 sArlu chadivA.gAnI kadilinchE vAkyam vokkaTi kUDA lEdu.pOlikalu,varNanalu ArTifishiyal gA,monOTonas gA anipinchAy
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 29, Oct 2005 1:39:52 PM IST
manasulo balamgaa taakina anubhUtulanu
teliya jeppe prayatnaalE ea vigrahaaraadhanalu , aalaya praakaaraalu .
chUstunnadE nijam , kanipimchanidi amtaa asatyam kaadu . manOnEtramto chUDu pIlchE gaali , manalni naDipe manasu kUDa kanipistaayi , kOnETi aDuguna burada emduku vumdO ardhamoutumdi
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 28, Oct 2005 7:48:08 PM IST
:))
Posted by: venkat suresh chowdary At: 28, Oct 2005 6:42:36 PM IST
aalayakOnETiki aDuguna pErukunna burada anna prayOgaM chaalaa baaguMdaMDee.
Posted by: Mrs. Jyotsna Kumar Mantha At: 28, Oct 2005 2:29:14 PM IST
chaalaa baagundanDii. .
Posted by: Mrs. Prasuna Ravindran Palathropu At: 28, Oct 2005 11:18:05 AM IST
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