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Articles: Poetry | | guDDi gurram | |
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| Dear Atanikante Ghanudu gaariki,
The poem is too good but for little fine tuning of words here n there. Two things reduced the intesity of the poem, 1. your disclaimer in the end 2. your name.
Keep it up.
Ramesh
Alok gaariki,
Healthy trend kavitvaanike gaadu, vimarsaku kooda undaalndi.
Ramesh
Posted by: Mr. Ramesh P At: 26, Nov 2005 2:53:25 PM IST
anTE modaTa mIru taDumukoni A tarvAta nannaDugutunnAranna mATa.inkOsAri taDumukOnDi evvarU chUDDamlEdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 16, Nov 2005 2:02:23 PM IST
vastav gaaru mee comments chustee
gommadikayala donga antee bujalu thadumukunnattu vundhi...
Posted by: Mr. Budatha At: 16, Nov 2005 1:21:42 PM IST
tiTTu kavitalu vATiki pEraDIlu.idi yEmAtram heltI trenDu kAdu.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 16, Nov 2005 10:33:50 AM IST
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