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Articles: Poetry | | teepi kannaa teepi ee renDaksharaala mooTa | |
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| Thanks everybody for your help some way or the other. Especially Andhrudu garu...thanks to you for your kind suggestion. I don't think I can write poetry in Telugu. As I said, they were mere trials.
Ram Prasad ji, thanks to you for your poem......It was indeed nice ....and made me smile.
Posted by: Mrs. sharmila Sanka At: 7, Dec 2005 9:04:29 PM IST
kavita paravAlEdaMDi bAgAnE vuMdi,
nEnukUDA aMdruDu gArichchina salahAla vaMTi vATikOsamE chUstunnAnaMDi....
aMdruDu maMchi salahAlichchAraMDi....
i will try 2 fallow thse things!!
ThanX
Posted by: GurusRi At: 7, Dec 2005 1:03:12 AM IST
naadoa chinna sajeshan' anDi -
kavita raayaDaaniki mundu vastuvunennu kunTaamu. anTae vishayam. aa tarvaata Sailini ennukunTaamu. anduloa nae bhaashanu ennukunTaamu. ivannee kalagalipi mana bhaavukata ku sari poayaelaa anchanaa vaesukunTaamu.
udaaharaNaku praema gurinchi mukhyangaa praema goppadi ani cheppaalanukunnaaru. anduku tagina Saili aedi? anduloa eTuvanTi padaalu vaaDaali ? anduloa padaalaa floa elaa unDaali ? vaakyam poortigaa unDaalaa kluptangaa unDaalaa? vishayaanni abrupt gaa cheppaalaa mottam chivarloa cheppaalaa?...prati vaakyaaniki oka arthaanni apaadistoo cheppaalaa kavita poorti ayyakae cheppalaa? kavita loa graandhikam enta unDaali elaa unDaali ? maanDalikam enta varaku vaaDaali elaanTi samayaalloa vaaDaali ?...ee praSnalapai avagaahana unTae kavitvam loa Silpam anTaaru adi chikka baDtundi. adi over a period of time and expereince , exposure meeda vastundi. aitae ee praSnalu manasuloa unchukuni ee saari attempt chaesi chooDanDi. mukhyangaa paaThakuDu ( ID kaadu )oka matured reader ani marava raadu. aa koaNam loa prayatninchi chooDanDi. meerentagaa mimmalni meerae mechchukunTaaroa?
(nothing offence meant )
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 5, Dec 2005 7:04:20 PM IST
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