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vArevvA bhalEgundi sAr mI lekchar maniddari Diskashan&lO SrISrI yendukulEnDi.kavitvam prayOgAtmakangA vunDAli.bAgundi.yEdi prayOgam ?yellA cheyyaTam ? vanTi praSnalaki samAdhAnamichcheyyanDi.dhanyulamautAm

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, Dec 2005 12:02:42 PM IST

Alok Gaaru Inta daaka evarini preminchaledu kaani.. Premiste maatram...Address leni vaallani preminchanandi..Maree anta baduddayi vedhavanu kaanu........

Posted by: Mr. arun Arun At: 10, Dec 2005 11:49:11 PM IST

Chakkati Prasna...Alok Meeru kooda ee kavitalani chadivaruga... Ila enta kaalam ilanti kavitalu chaduvutaru?? Visugu ravatam leda... Ave padalu...tene, vana, puvvu..chandrudu...ee kavitalo choosina...Kondariki bhoomi gundranga undi anna invention kooda...saanubhooti mundu deniki paniki radu ani telchestunnaru... Ante kavitvam ante...manaki ee pani lenappudu manaku gurtu unna konni padalani..istam vachinattu ga ...rayatamana mee uddeshyam??? Muvva kante sompu adrusta devata kante vimpu koredanu nee pempu... Praasa tappa indulo ardam emina unda??? Anyways..My intension is not really to crticise the poets...I want to tell..that stop this 'boring stuff'... Kavita anedi prayogatmakanga unte baguntundi ani naa bhavana... Meerannattu...Factionism..meeda naaku mee anta avagahana ledu...Deenni batti chooste Sree Sree ni kooda meeru factionist antaremo anipistundi. Kavita viplavam anna Viplava kavitvam anna..Factionism kaadu...Ikapothe..Pourusham anna maata enduku vaadanu ante...Aa kavitalo mana chuttu emi jarigina manaki anavasaram..manam aalochinchanavasaram ledu...Cyclone vaste manakenti..challa gaali veestunnanta sepu..evaro konni prema maatalu cheptunnanta sepu..manam happy ga gadipeddam...ide kada...aa kavita saaransam...........

Posted by: Mr. arun Arun At: 10, Dec 2005 11:32:21 PM IST

kavitvamlO sainTifik TemparA? akkaDekkaDO kavitvamlO paurusham vunDAlannAru? I sainTifik Temparu A paurusham vokkaTigAvA? kOnchem serchu laiTu vEsi vivarinchanDi sArU

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 10, Dec 2005 9:02:54 PM IST

Meeru Practicality ki dooranga...raastunnaru....... Prema ante ..Dasoham ani nirupinchadama mee uddesyam?!!! Okka sari..aalochinchandi...Jeevitam lo evaritonaina atuvanti feeling kalugutunda?? Prastutam Mana telugu kavulaki/kavayitrulaki unna pedda samasya ento telusa??? Evo konni padalani... perchi, gaali, neeru, puvvu, vaana, tene..lantivi...chivarlo..oka prasna veste manchi kavita avutundi anukuntunnaru... Atuvanti kavitalanu mana vaallu 'Sehbahs' antunnaru kooda...Adi mana durdrustam...Mana basha ki anta chetta stiti pattindi ippudu... Kavita ante ...prema..premikudu..priyuralu.puvvu, kaluva,,chandrudu ..ivi unte chaalu...Hit ayyipotundi... Ippatikayina michi potyindi ledu..Maarandi...Sorry Marchandi!!!..Mee style...Practical ga raayandi... Jaraganivi..jarugutnnattu raayatam goppa kaadu..jarige vatikosam aalochinchetattu raayandi... Scientific Temper..Undali Kavitalo... I wish u good luck

Posted by: Mr. arun Arun At: 10, Dec 2005 0:09:32 AM IST

yes kavitvAnni rAyaDAnikellappuDU prayatnistUnE vunDanDi.gAnI intakumundu nE cheppinaTTu manchi kavitA sankalanAlatO bATu ikkaDostunna manchi kavitalni kUDA chadavanDi mI telugu bhAsha tappaka merugu paDtundi

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, Dec 2005 1:43:10 PM IST

sharmila gAru... mIrEmi phIl kAnavasaraM lEdaMDi.. mI kavita aMta koTTEsE rItilO EmI lEdu parvAlEdaMDi Keep writing!! GO ON! chiMtA narasiMhArAvu gAru..... mari mIreMdukaMDi kavita nachcha napuDu ala kAmeMTs rAstAru mIrU rakuMDA vuMdavachchugA! mIku tOchinaTlu chebutArA lEka ....

Posted by: GurusRi At: 7, Dec 2005 1:17:47 AM IST

hahahaha sharmila garu.. mee kavitvam emo kaani..mee kavitvam meeda ram prasad garu rasina comment chadivi.. ganta sepu navvukunna.. i am very sorry to say.. that ur poem is not good at all.. Narsimha rao gari ki ela nachindo ardham kavatam la..

Posted by: Mr. Sai Krishna Mukkamala At: 7, Dec 2005 0:14:37 AM IST

Thanks a bunch to every one for your frank feedback. Thanks for your time too. I just tried writing in Telugu though I knew it wasn't good. Sorry Venkatesh Prasad garu,ika nundi meekaa paristhitini nenu tedalchukoledu. Plz forgive my Telugu wrtings.

Posted by: Mrs. sharmila Sanka At: 6, Dec 2005 9:05:27 PM IST

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