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baagundanDi.
naaku kooDaa
annee rivarsu lO chEsE vaaNNi
maraNam tO jeevitam modalupeDataanika
anna vaakyaalu chaalaa nachchaayi
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 9, Dec 2005 1:42:37 PM IST
kiraN gaaru ! naakoo konta alaanae anipinchindi...kaapoatae... ' laukika prajaaswaamika ...' anae khanDika gurinchi renDoa khanDikaloa paaThakunni ( ID kaadu ) prepare chaesinaTTu unTundi. ani anipinchindi naaku. anyway thank u for the suggestion. pls keep suggesting .
kaamaeSwara Sarma gaaru ! namastae ! kavitaloa paTTaalasina paayinT paTTaaranDi.... :)...aa renDu vachanaalae ee kavitaku praaNam andukae kavita mottam paaThakunni ( ID kaadu ) chadivaeTTu chaeyaalani prayatninchaa. nijamae meerannaTTu kavitaa roopam kunna limitation idi. anta elaborate gaa vivarinchi aaloachana raekettinchae frame work kaadidi. kaani alaa chaeyaalanTae inkaa naaku entoa pariNati raavaalanukunTaa. adi anubhavam meeda meelaanTi anubhavam unna vaaLLa feed back valla vastundaemoa chooDaali.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 8, Dec 2005 10:47:07 PM IST
A very good poem!
' annI rivarsulO chEsEvANNi
maraNaM nuMchE jIvitAnni modalu peDatAnika '
is the highlight.
ayitE ilAMTi kavitalu, janAlalO mIru kOrukuMTunna AlOchana kannA, AvESAnnE kaligiMchE avakASaM ekkuvagA uMdani nA abhiprAyaM. bahuSA kathA rUpaMlO ayitE AlOchanaki ekkuva avakASamuMTuMdi.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 7, Dec 2005 11:37:27 PM IST
guMDelO guchchukunElA vunnAyaMDi mI kavitA bANAlu
Posted by: GurusRi At: 7, Dec 2005 7:24:09 PM IST
AndhrAjI mIru chevilO sIsam annappuDallA nE chevinillu kaTTuku aDutunTAnu.I ApAdanaku chAritrika AdhArAlunnAyA?lEka enTIyAr pOtulUri vIrabramhEndra charitralOni pATE AdhAramA?cheppanDi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, Dec 2005 5:51:15 PM IST
charitraloa jarigina ghoaraalu chadivi ippuDu naeraalu chaesainaa sarididdudaamanukunae avagaahana porapaaTu. adae vartistae agra varNaalu appuDu maa chevulloa seesam poasaaru ippuDu maemu poastaamu enta ibbandigaa unTundoa...appuDu moghalulu maa daevaalayaalanu maa aastulanu praaNaalanu dhwamsam chaesaaru..maemu ippuDu badulu teerchukunTaamu anna vishayam anta kannaa ghoaramaina tappidam. charitra tavvi charitraloa tappidaalanu tirigi raaddaamani kaaka charitranu samaaja puroagati kramam loa elaa upayoaginchukoavaali ana aloachana eppaTikee Sraeyashkaram.
aa pai gamaninchaalasindi samasya nu choosae vidhaanaaniki taThastha roopam unDadu...okka baadhituni kaLLaloanchi chooDDam tappa...
aa pai ae saamaajika samasya kooDaa vaTTi raajakeeya ' koTlaaTa ' kaadu..ae renDu paarTeela career samasyalaa pradhaana roopangaa unDadu..adi saadhaaraNangaa oka socio-economic-cultural-political problem gaanae unTundi. adi anni koaNaalloa edurkoavaalsina samasya.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 7, Dec 2005 5:20:08 PM IST
ae pani modalu peTTinappuDu mundugaa palikae verses - last two sentences
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 7, Dec 2005 4:42:36 PM IST
mAkoddI telladoratanamu laanO, swaatatramE mA janmahakkani chATanDIlA pATagA rAstE inkA uttEjaparachochchEmO AndhrAjI kavitakanTE
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, Dec 2005 4:18:04 PM IST
ae pani modalu peTTinappuDu mundugaa palikae verses - last two sentences
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 7, Dec 2005 4:04:00 PM IST
sebhASh AMDhruDU!
chAlAkAlAniki sAmAjikasfRuhakaligina kavita kanapaDiMdi.
prastuta arAchaka paristhitulaku dITugA prajalu cheitanyavaMtulu kAvAlaMTE uttEjaparichE kavitalu chAlA avasaram ani nAbhAvana.
nAku nachchiMdi.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 7, Dec 2005 2:51:13 PM IST
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