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kAmESwarjI sthOmatannadi pratokkarikI vunDanE vunTundi.ippuDu mIku kavitvamlO inTreshTu vundi.A inTreshTunu jashT chadavaDAnikE kAkanDA lOtugA artham chEskODAniki prayatnistunnAru.allA chEsEvALLandarikI EdOka levellO sthOmata vunTundi.manam vimarsistunna avatalivALLu vayasulO peddOLLanO, pojishanlO goppOLLanO mohamATapaDipOyi mana sthOmatani anDar esTimETu vEskODamenduku? adanta avasaramA?af kOrs mI sthOmatani ellA vADukOvAlannadi mIku mAtramE sambandhinchindi.gAnI nA abhiprAyam cheppE prayatnam jEsA gOpIgAri nAnIllO kavitvAmSam gurinchi kiraNjI cheppAru.ganaka mI modaTi praSnapai nE mATlADanu renDOdAniki samAdhAnamistAnu.egjAmpulgA vO nAni (gOpIjIdi kAdu) prEmikulu enDalO mATlADukonTunnAru enDa vAri jOliki veLLadu indulO ellAnTi sAmAjikatA lEdu.kavitvASam lEdu.nAnI niyamAllO mukhyamaina aksharAla sankhyani pATinchalEdu. chivaragA mIru mI mUDO praSnalO annaTlu modaTi renDu lain&lalO voka vishayam chivari renDu lain&lalO marO vishayam cheppi A renDiTikI vO linku kalpinchE prayatnam jaragalEdu.I rachaita gAridE marO nAnI pOsTarni adEpanigA chUstunnADu Akhari bassupOyi araganTaindi indulO gUDA adE tantE.yE vokka niyamAnnI pATinchakapOvaDam abhyudaya,viplava kavitalni A tarvAti taramvALLu apArtham chEsukonnArannArE nAnIlani tolitaram vALLE intalA 'artham' chEskonnAru gadA dInnEmanAli? marikonni nAnIlu chUDanDi illokaTundani virravIgAlA? addekaitE enni kompalO! udyamam ragalakapOtE prati udyamam vRudhaa avutundi illA artham partham lEkanDA rAsEvATikI goppa sAhitI vilavalunna jayadEvuni ashTapadulaki, vEmana padyAlani linkeTTaDam pApam aparAdham ghOram .nAnIlanE vimarSinchaDAniki sthOmata lEdanTU vinayam chUyinchAru mIru.gAnI kavitvamlO vochchina vO vikRuta prayOgAnni vEmana padyAlatO pOlchi vATi prayOjakatvAnni praSinchaDAnni mAtram chAlA suluvugA jEsArE.nyAyamEnanTArA? tommidELLa pApa rAsukochchi nAku chUyinchinadi chUDanDi yentOmandi kRushNullunnA yaSOdamma evarikOsamO vetukutOndi hammayyA vetukutunnadi dorikinaTTundi mA ammalA navvutOndi nEnu veLLi aDiginaanu yaSOdammA ! intamandi kRushNulunnA nI kRushNunni ellA kanipeTTAvani yaSOdamma navvi cheppindi mAyA kRushNullaki nemali pincham lEdu ani tammuDu skUllO kRushNuDi vEsham vEsukonTE I ammAyiki illA rAyAlanipinchindaTa.A bhAvamlO swachChata yentavundO chUDanDi.padAla kUrpullO vunna amAyakavtvam naijatanu chUDanDi.I mAtram pATi jEstunnAyA nAnIlu?

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 30, Dec 2005 12:26:22 PM IST

nAnIlaguriMchi maMchO cheDO charchiMchE sthOmata nAku lEdu. kAnI kiraN gAri latest commentski spaMdiMchAlanipiMchiMdi. sAmAjikataku peddapITa veyyaDAnni atanu tappupaDutunnaTTugA nAkanipiMchiMdi. ikkaDa oka vishayaM gamaniMchAli. nAnI avvAlaMTE sAmAjikata uMDAlEmOkAnI, sAmAjikata uMDi avasaramainanni aksharAlU, vAkyAlU unnaMta mAtrAna adi nAni ayipOtuMdani gOpIgAru kAnI vAri vArasulukAnI cheppalEdani nEnanukuMTAnu. swatahAgA muMdu kavitwaM uMDAli. adi sAmAjika amSamai uMDAli. adi inni aksharAlu, lain lalO uMTE dAni pEru nAni ani nAmakaraNaM chEsAru, ani nA uddESaM. kAbaTTi I charchalO tAtwikatakI, sAmAjikatakI madhya comparison anawasaraM. sAmAjikata uMTE chAlu adi nAnI ayipOtuMdani gOpIgAri lEka vAri anuyAyula bhAvana ani anukODaM kUDA samaMjasaMkAdu. viplava, abhyudaya kavitwAlakochchina chikkE ikkaDA vachchinaTTuMdi. A kavitwa udyamAlani prAraMbhiMchina vALLevarU abhyudayaM lEdA viplavaM uMTE chAlu adi kavitwaM ayipOtuMdani cheppalEdu. adi tarwAta vALLu koMdaru chEsukunna apArthaM. iMka, minIkavitalu cheyyalEnidi mahAminIkavitalaina nAnIlu EMchEstAyani praSna. dIrgha kavitalu cheyyalEnidi minIkavitalu EMchEstAyani minIkavitalu vachchAyi? cheppadalchukunna vishayaM niDivi chinnadaitE adi minIkavita avutuMdi. alAgE, cheppE rUpaMlO 25 aksharAlu, 4 lainlu uMTE, A rUpAniki nAni ani nAmakaraNaM chEsAru. dAnivalla prayOjanaM EmiTi aMTE - vEmana ATaveladulu, sinArE pra'paMchapadulu', jayadEvuni ashTapadulU - vITivalla EM prayOjanamO adE prayOjanaM. oka nibaddhamaina rUpaMlO veluvaDE kavitalaki aMtargataMgA oka symmetry vastuMdi. dAnivalla manasulani suluvugA hattukonE guNaM kalugutuMdi. kAbaTTi, nAnIla guNadOsha vichAraNa cheyyAlaMTE, I kriMdi vishayAlu gamaniMchAli, viSlEshiMchAli: 1. nAnIlugA pilavabaDutunna anniTilOnI kavitwAMSa unnadA, kanIsaM gOpIgAri nAnIlalO? ikkaDa koMta subjectivity pravESistuMdanna mATa marachipOkUDadu. 2. nAnIki sAmAjikata kachchitaMgA uMDAlA? alA ayitE anniTlOnU unnadA? nAku telisi adi pre-requisite kAdu. 3. nAnI rUpaMlO AyA kavulu sAdhiMchina symmetry, dAnivalla kaligina kavitA prayOjanaM EmainA unnAyA? dIni guriMchi evarO viSlEshiMchAru, evarO ekkaDO gurtu lEdu. modaTi reMDu lain lalO oka vishayaM, taruvAti reMDu lain lalO maroka vishayaM prastAviMchi A reMDiTiki connection ivvaDaM - modalaina rUpa vaividhyAla guriMchi, vATilOni sogasunu guriMchi. ika charcha konasAgiMchaMDi!

Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 30, Dec 2005 0:29:42 AM IST

kiraN gaaritO pUrtigaa Ekeebhavistunnaanu. kaviki kaavalsiMdi nijaayitee. nEnu maaranu samaajaanni maarchaDaaniki maatraM kavitalu raastaanu anaDaMkannaa avivEkaM marokaTi lEdu. maarpu anEdi mundu manishinuMchE modalautuMdi. aMdaMgaa virisina puvvuni chUsinappuDu, chauraasiyaa vENugaanaM vinnappuDu, ravi varma chitraM chUsinappuDu manaki kaligE anubhUti maaTallO cheppalEM. aitE daanivalla prayOjanaM EmiTi anna praSna atyaMta saMkuchitaMgaa anipistuMdi.

Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 29, Dec 2005 1:47:49 PM IST

kiraN ! gaaru ! naenu meeku sajesT chaesina vishayaalu chaalaa jenaral` gaa oka broad frame work nu soochinchaDaaniki raasaanu. naanee kavitaa roopamaa ani kaaka naaneelaloa unna pratyaekata aemiTi? induloa unna kavitaa viluvalaenTi? migataa prayoagaalatoa poalchi choostae induloa unna bala heenata aenTi? anna praSnalapai nirdushTangaa an`vayinchi charcha chaeyaalanTae konta samayam kaavaali. meeru charchanu raekittinchae uddaeSyam toa raasina ee vyaasaaniki abhinandaneeyulu. kaapoatae inkaa koddigaa ground prepare chaesi unTae baavunDaedi.

Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 28, Dec 2005 7:28:13 PM IST

AndrAjI mIru cheppindi nE cheppinadAnikI pedda tEDA lEdu.kAkapOtE mIru konchem thIsIsu rAsinaTTu rAsAru antE.kavitvamlO ekanAmiksu gurinchi mATlADAlani mIru cheppEdi chUstunTE yUnivarsiTIla valla kavitvAniki yenta pramAdam jarugutOndannadi arthamautundi.kavitvAniki mAnavIyaparimaLam vunDAlanna subramaNyamgAri mATalu ikkaDa anvayinchAla.

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Dec 2005 11:05:28 AM IST

saamaajikata anae maaTa saahityam loa oka anTa raani padangaa chooDaalsina avasaram laedu :).. saamaajikata nunDi puTTukochchae saahityam maatramae nilabaDutundi anTae sariggaa artham chaesukoavaali. maanDalikam loa kavitvam prajala bhaashanunDi puTTukocchindi. id oka roopamu. alaagae languge kunDae nativity ni ignore chaesi vachchae eTuvanTi saahitya roopamainaa artificial gaa manugaDaa saaginchaalasindae tappa nijaaniki oka balamaina saahitya roopangaa nilabaDa naeradu. ee prapanchamloa ae kavitvam ainaa...oka vilakshaNa roopangaa nilabaDina ae saahityamainaa..adi khachchitangaa saamaajika naepathyam nunDi veluvaDindae. adi ' kanyaa Sulkam ' ainaa...adi ' SRungaara naishadhi ' ainaa...' mahaa bhaaratam ' ainaa aedainaa. aitae induloa aevi charitraloa prajala paaThakuLLa medallaloa unDi poataayoa adi prastutaaniki kaasaepu pakkana peDdaamu. kaviki aloachanalu gaaliloa nunDi Tappuna moTTi kaaya koTTi naTTu unTaayi gaani ...nijaaniki aa sRujanaatmakata sigareT kaalustunnaDu kaabaTToa Soonyam loa pichchi choopulu choosae skill undi kaabaTToa raadu. aitae aayaa saamaajika sandarbham baTTi vaaTi life time aadhaara paDi unTundi. graameeNa saahitee roopam loa okaTaina ' oggu katha ' doora darSan` loa vastae nijaaniki entamandi paTTaNa aksharaasyulanu taakutundi ?....alaa ani oggu katha significance asalu laedu ani anagalamaa? idi jaagartagaa artham chaesukoavaalsina amSamu. idi naneeki inka vaerae paaneeki kooDaa vartistundi. renDoa amSangaa kavitaa vastuvuku sambandhinchina discussion ikkaDa chaeyaDam laedu prastutaaniki. ee charcha aedi nijamaina kavitaa roopam ? aedi deergha kaalika saahitee roopamu ? anae praSnalanu madhinchaalanTae induku saahitee paramaina vishayam okaTae sari poadu..konta sociology konta history konta economics avasaram. saahityaanni ilaa isolated gaa discuss chaestoo poatae aekaabhipraayaaniki daggara raavaDam anta easy gaa kudaradu anukunTaa mari. ika evarainaa personal agenda toa aedoa oka prayoagam chaesaaru ani chepparanukoanDi. naaku eTuvanTi prayoagaalaToa eTuvanTi paechee laedu. saahityamanTae okariddaru vyaktulu kalisi gusa gusa laaDukuni jaripae mantanam kaadu ani naa nammakam. @ Subramanyam gaaru maanaveeya parimaLam anTae? maanavatvam unnadaa laenidaa? maanavatvam annadi udaara vaadaaniki sambandhinchina vishayam. saamaajika prayoajanaala kosamae kaLa anTae - chemaToaDchi pani chaesae raitu koolie gurinchoa, rekkalu mukkalu chaesukuni pani chaesae kaarmikuni gurinchi maatramae raasae kavita saamaajika prayoajanaala koasam anae artham sphuristundi mari. alaa avasaram laedu prati manishi saamaajika jeevitam loa spRushinchae ae amSam ainaa sarae - maanava samabandhaalu ..udaaharaNaku talli tanDrula toa anubandhamu, praeyasi toa anubandhamu ( mana vaaLLu idoa maanava sambandham kaakunDaa aedoa kaalpanika sambandhangaa project chaestaenae chikaaku ), pachaari koTTuloa perigi poayae dharalu, aafeesuloa pani vattiDi, bhaarya vanDina vanTa parimaLam aedannaa kaavachchu. adi maanava jeevitanni elaa spRushinchindi anna vishayam mukyam tarvaata ae perspective toa choosaamu anna vishayam vastundi. charchaloa ilaa chaalaa deviate ayyi poayae pramaadam undi ani bhayam :)... poddunna eppuDoa ee kaamenTs raasi peTTukunna kaanee aafeesuloa pani unDi Desk daggara unDa laekapoayaa. ippuDu poasT nokkaa mari. kiraN gaaru ! naenu paina general gaa maaTlaaDinaa adi naanee laanTi prayoagaalaku kooDaa vartistundi. ika naanee gurinchae specific gaa anduloa unDae niyamaalu neetulu gurinchi inta mandi inta charcha chaesaaka idi kavitvam kaadu ani taelchaaru anukoanDi..mari inta charcha enduku anna praSna vastundi. :) :)...

Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 27, Dec 2005 9:46:11 PM IST

allAgE sAr vALLochchi rAsEnta varaku nEnu sailenTugA vunTA

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 27, Dec 2005 12:26:40 PM IST

subramaNyam gArU kavitvAllO annEsi rakAlu vunDakUDani nA opIniyan .yE kavaina kavayitrainA nEnu phalAnA vAdapu kavinO kavayitrinO ani mudravEsukonTE vALLa buddhi anta kudinchukupOyindanEdi nirvivAdAmSam .kaviki kAvalsindi kavitvAniki tagga vastuvu.adi anubhUti kAvochchu, abhyudayam kAvochchu. vaiyaktika bAdhalu, sArvatrika himsalu EvainA kAvochchu.voka gATaku tananu tAnu kaTTukOni kavi tanani kadilinchE dAni pai mAtramE kavitvIkaristADu.allA kAka gAnugeddulai rAyaDamE vyasanangA peTTukonETOLLu rAsindAnnE rAstU vunTAru.A gAnugeddutanam yenta pElavangA ekkaDi dAkA pOtundanTE TrAfik jAm taggaDAniki nAlugu cheTlu koTTi flayOvar kaDitE dAnikI kavitvam rAstAru.adE flaiyOvar kindana evaraina kApuram peTTunTE vALLani khALI chEyistE dAnikI kavitvam rAstAru.illAnTidAnni yE rakapu kavitvamanAli?

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 27, Dec 2005 11:56:34 AM IST

aaMdhruDu gaaru, alOk gaarU... anubhUti kavitvamainaa, abhyudaya kavitvamainaa , bhaava kavitvamainaa viplava kavitvamainaa , bhakti kavitvamainaa ilaa kavitvaM Edainaa , moulikaMgaa kavitvaaniki oka maanaveeya parimaLaM uMDaalani naaku anipistuMdi ... kavi maanavataa vaadi aiteeraali ... kaabaTTi ' kaLa kOsamE kaLa ' anE bhaava kavitvaM , 'saamaajika prayOjanaala kOsamE kaLa' anE abhyudaya kavitvaM reMDU ativaadaalE ani naa uddESaM.

Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Dec 2005 11:13:44 AM IST

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