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Articles: Poetry | nUtana samvatsaraaniki | |
| thank u sir and madam
let me know what was missing in it
ravikiran
Posted by: yuvakiran k At: 3, Jan 2006 1:49:33 PM IST thank u sir and madam
let me know waht was missing in it
ravikiran
Posted by: yuvakiran k At: 3, Jan 2006 1:49:01 PM IST Happy new year!
ravikiraN gArU, mI kavita chAlA bAguMdi.
It has both the spontaneous flow and craftmanship, which make a poem a good poem.
I liked the line 'nijAlu maMDE agni gOLAlu, kalalu merisE chukkalu' very much.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 2, Jan 2006 10:02:46 PM IST
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