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Articles: Poetry | | saayaM chEyagalaraa? | |
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| baavuMdaMDee
Posted by: Mrs. Jyotsna Kumar Mantha At: 17, Jan 2006 5:41:06 PM IST
kAlAnni gODaki mEku koTTibaMdhiMchaDaM
chaMdamAmaki naxatraMku madhyagaladUraMlO SAMti saMdESaM vrAyAlanukOvaDaM
Oh !
adbhuta pada prayOgaM
kaviki bhAvanASaktiki miMchina sAyaM iMkEmuMdi?
Proceed - Best Of luck!
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 17, Jan 2006 10:09:25 AM IST
last para lo punch debba tinindi...chaalaa obviousgaa undi expression...konchem eppudanna konchem alochinchi last para modify chesi choodandi
otherwise good work !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 17, Jan 2006 0:15:27 AM IST
Subrahmanyam garu
antE anTArA :).....tappakunDA maLLI prayatnistaanu...
Thanku
Tulasimohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 16, Jan 2006 11:33:01 PM IST
mariMta padunu avasaraM anipistOMdaMDee.. konnaaLLaagi marokasaari raayaDaaniki prayatniMchaMDi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Jan 2006 10:40:47 PM IST
Very nice poem Tulasi.
Posted by: Mrs. Prasuna Ravindran Palathropu At: 16, Jan 2006 8:44:51 PM IST
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