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Articles: Poetry | | Ammaayi Parichayam ... Prema ... Pelli .... Pillalu ... Murali voohallo ... | |
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| mari adhe kadhaa cheppaanu ..
words anni almost (50*2=100) different words
raasaanu kadaaa ...
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 16, Apr 2003 12:28:57 PM IST Antyaprasala kosam baaga kastapaddaru..
Posted by: Ms. Spandana Kavithanjali M. At: 16, Apr 2003 12:26:03 PM IST sorry for troubling U again ..
just i wanted to share some thing with u ..
i want to convey my sincere Thanks to my friend U.L.P, who is directly/indirectly responsible for creation of this article ..,
nuvvu maatrame kaadu nenu koodaa raayagalanu choodu ..ani saradaagaa annaanu friend tho ..
annaanu kaanee ...serious gaa try cheddam ani saturday and sunday 2 days full time work chesi , raasina daanni cheripi ,maralaa raasi ...abbo asta kastaalu padi chivaraku ilaa raayagaligaanu ...
appudu buddhi vachindhi ..anavasaram gaa
pragalbaalaku povaddhu ..evaru cheyaalsina pani vaallu cheyaali ani...
kaanee anthaa raasaaka ""haaa , parvaaledhuraa murali ,nuvvu koodaa raayagalavu"" ani naaku nenu bujam thatti encourage chesukunnaanu ..
ofcourse the above said friend has appreciated my work and has given 50/100...
strict correctin kadhaa ?? thane kaanee teacher ayi vunte aaa pillala pani govindhaa...
mari meeru enni marks vestaaro chooddam..
pass cheyandi pls ..
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 15, Apr 2003 10:30:10 AM IST just half an hour back article site lo post cheyatam jarigindhi ...
naa article ki nene first comments raasukunte ...saradaagaa vuntundhi kadaa ..
naa " voohala allika " lo naaku nachina lines
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1)neetho maatalaadina aneka SANDARBHAALU ...
naa notiki padipoyaayi GODREJ THAALAALU ...,
2)naaku premagaa thinipinchina GORU MUDDALU ...
neeku prathigaa chellinchina CHILIPI MUDDULU ...,
3)neetho phone lo SOLLU GANTALAKU GANTALU ...
naakemo post lo BILLU VELAKU VELU ...,
4)nuvvu nenu ayyaamu OKARIKOKALLU ...
naaku neeku vastaaru THODU MAROKKALLU ...,
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hope u have found-out rhyming in the words at the end of each line and the begining also starts with words like
nuvvu,nenu,neeku,naaku ....throughout the kavitha ... but at the end ...manamu ane words ..hope u like this article ...
naa inko article TIMEPASS section lo vundhi ...
hope, in both of the articles ..u find ...parinathi chendina prema(matured love) .. i mean ...preminchatam njoy chesi vadileyatam kaakundaa ..
preminchina vaallani pelli chesukuni vaallatho happy gaa gadapaalani anukune prema annamaata ...not timepass love ...
waiting for ur valuable comments ..
now it is time to go for work ...
meet u some time later ...
Murali T Mohan
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 15, Apr 2003 10:06:40 AM IST
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