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Articles: Poetry | | KAVANA CHANDRIKA | |
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| Nice work, kavita bhavam, and padalu empika ee kavitaku asset. But antya prasa padaala meaning koddiga saripoyinatlu anipinchatam ledu.
"kurulu kari mabbulai viriya" badulu
"krurulu kari mabbulai kadala"
"meni merupulandu" badulu
"meni vayyaralandu"
"udayabhanudi meria" badulu
"udaya bhanudi veluga"
etc.,
Keep writing.. good luck. :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 23, Apr 2003 4:14:49 AM IST
simple ga raste bagundedi...pedda padalu vadatm tagginchandi or padalani sralamga cheppandi :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 22, Apr 2003 12:03:38 PM IST
Hello Silpa garu,
bagundhi poem...manchi words use chesaru...bhavam kooda bagundhi :-)
I like it very much.
But chinna suggestion andi....meeru ee poem ni telugu lo post chesi vuntey inkaa bagundedhi chala bagundedhi....okasary try cheyandi...
Hope some more beautiful poems will come out from ur pen...Goodluck.
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 18, Apr 2003 8:09:05 PM IST
Nice poem with good words..keep it up..:)
Posted by: Mr. Suresh At: 18, Apr 2003 3:55:43 PM IST
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