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Articles: Poetry | | saarE jahaa se achChaa... | |
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| vAstav jI, nEnu mItO oppukOnu. kavitwAniki ajaMDA unnaMtamAtrAna aMdulO kavitwaM taggipOdu. prati kavitakI target audience khachchitaMgA uMTAru. aMdulOni ekkuva takkuvalu kavitwa viluvani peMchavU, taggiMchavU. prapaMchapAThakulaMdarU nA kavitaku ADiyensE anukODaM kavi amAyakatwamE avutuMdi. kavi tanu balaMgA nammina siddhAMtAnni kavitalO nijAyitIgA cheppAlikAni adi eMtamaMdini kadaliMpajEstuMdi ani AlOchiMchi, ekkuvamaMdiki AmOdayOgyamainadE rAstE adi kavitwamE anipiMchukOdEmO! alAchEstE kavitwaMlO viplavAlE rAvu kadA! ayitE, tanu nammina dAnni nijAyitIgA cheppina pratIdI kavitwaM ayipOdu. vyaktIkariMchE vidhAnaM adi kavitA kAdA anna vishayAnni nirdhAristuMdi. cheppE vishayaMlO nijAyiti, cheppE vidhAnaMlO praj~na unnappuDu tanE ADiyensuni sRushTiMchukuMTuMdi.
iMka kavitwaM tarkabadhdhamai uMDAlA lEdA anna vAdana guriMchi. nA samAdhAnaM avunu, kAdu!
kavitwaMlO cheppE vishayaM SAstraMlOlAgA nirUpaNaki loMgAlani evvarU anukOranukuMTAnu (AMdhruDugAritO sahA). ayitE kavitaki oka consistency uMDAlani, internal contradictions uMDakUDadani AMdhruDugAri uddESaM anukuMTAnu. idi sAdhAraNa nyAyaM kAvachchukAnI anni chOTlA vartiMchadu. 'A poem without internal contradiction is not a poem.' ani Donald Hall annADu. okokkasAri kavi manasulOnE, lEdA cheppE vishayaMlOnE oka contradiction uMDavachchu. appuDu kavitwaMlO kUDA uMDaDaMlO AScharyaM lEdu. kAnI cheppE vishayaM spashTamainappuDu contradictions uMTE kavitwa viluvani taggistAyi. kEvala asaMbadhdhaM, atArkikaM ainadi kavitwaM kAlEdu!
iMtakI ilAMTi charchalu ilA E mUlO dAkkuni chesEkannA aMdarikI telisElA cheyyagaligitE bAguMTuMdi kadA:-)
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 4, Feb 2006 6:07:27 PM IST
Imadhya kavitala sekshan vIdhinATaka DailAgultO ninDipOyi charchalakEmAtram avakASam lEkanDA aipOyindi.gAnI ikkaDO mUla illA charcha konasAgistunna kiraN`jIki AndhrAjIki kRutaj~natalu cheputunnA
vishayamlOkostE kavitvamanEdi manalOvunDE bhAvAlaki rUpamichchE prakriya.dAniki bhAsha vAhakangA panijEstundi.konni bhAvAlni SabdapradhAnangA chepitE efekTivgA vunTAy.konniTiki SabdamkanTE anubhavam lEka anubhUti yathAtathangA AvishkarinchAlsi vunTundi.mottAniki mana manasuku daggiragAvunDE bhAvAnni chadivEvALLa manasullOki pravESapeTTE prayatnamE kavitvam.allAnTi kavitvam eppuDaitE ajenDA rangu pulumukonTundO appuDE adi tana TArgeT ADiyen&sunu nirNayinchEsukoni sankuchitamaipOtundi.
prastutam yE duniyA yE mehafil anna rachanaku riTArTugA vochchinaTTundi I sArE jahasE achChA.renDiTlOnU ajenDAlE pradhAnamauDamtO renDU sankuchitAlaipOyi allAnTi bhAvAlunna vALLanE kadilimpajEsAyi gAnI janasAmAnyAnni gAdu.anTE dAnartham migatAvALLevvarikI charitra j~nAnam lEdanA? viSlEshaNA sAmarthyam lEdanA? kachchitangA kAdu.gAnI evarainA vAri manasulOni vOha chinna sangharshaNa, bhayam , bAdhani sUTigA tAkE imEjarItO chepitE rAjakIyAlakatItangA, ajenDAlakatItangA spandistAru.iddI kavitvam yokka asalu prayOjanam.ninAda kavitvAllO kavitvam sunnA ani gAdu kavitvapu SAtam takkuvani abhiprAyam.bhAvAlni viSAlamaina rahadArilO naDipinchaDamE kavi lakshyamaivunDAli, irukusandullOki gAdu.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 3, Feb 2006 1:02:06 PM IST
Mr Andhrudu
thanks for your comments. E duniyaa E meh`fil` anna kavita chadivitE meeku kliyargaa telustumdi.
nijaamu navaabu pettanaaniki saMbaMdhimchinadainaa, matadurahamkaaramtO himduvulani rajaakarulu elaa vEdhiMchaaranEdi charitrE chebutumdi. naagasaaki meeda aaTambaaMbu matadurahamkaaramtO amerikaa vEsimdani meeru ekkaDa chadivaarO cheppaMDi. nEnoo chadivi nErchukumTaanu.
Mr Sai Kiran
samaajamlOni kuLlu oka vyaktikE parimitamautumdaa? adi saarvatrikamaina amSaM emduku kaadu?
Posted by: ELIXIR At: 3, Feb 2006 12:57:53 PM IST
kavitvam unnaa...
cheppadalchukundi klaariTee laedanipistundanDi.
gaalini nammaku, poolanu nammaku...ani saDan` gaa madhyaloa modalu peTTaDam loa uddaeSyam teleedu.
aapaina kalushitamaina kalupu mokkalivi...ani vaeTini annaroa mee kavita cheppadu implisiT` gaanainaa sarae.
aa tavaata avagaahanaloa claariTee laedu. rajaakaarla unmaadam mataaniki sambandhindi kaadu adi nijaam pettanaaniki sambandhinchindi ani telisina nijam. daanni ikkaDa enduku prastaavinchaaroa teleedu mari. naijaam navaabu muslim kaabaTTaa? ( naagasaaki meeda baambulu vaesindi krisTiyans` anTaaraa? )
ika induloa unDae mesaej nu choosinaa sarae anduloa sari aina approach laedu. baabar` neeDaloa raamuDi ratham mukkalavvaDam aemiTi? kulam paerutoa matam paerutoa charitra tavvi Siksha vaeyaDam modalu peDtae mana taatala tappulaku Sikshincha baDaalsina nambar` saripoadu.
@ kiran gaaru
kavi individuality vyaktigata ajenDaa laanae unTundanDi. cheppae ae vishayamainaa kavi taanu nammindi anukunTae adae kavitaku ajenDaa avutundi. adi tappu paTTaalsina vishayam kaadu anukunTaa kaani aa vishayam loa unna taarkikata aa expression baTTi kavitaku rangu ruchi vaasana vastaayi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 2, Feb 2006 6:44:56 PM IST
@ Sai Kiran Kumar
What is the basis to say there is no poetry in my poem? Why dont you explain?
Posted by: ELIXIR At: 2, Feb 2006 2:26:39 PM IST
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