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Articles: Poetry | | Ninnu veedi velthunnaa............... | |
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| rahul,
ee kavitha kavitha laga ledu.. vachanam laga vundi.. nalugu matalu perchintalu vundi..
oka orvadi tho wrataniki pratninchu..
shipam ga malachatam ivanni chala sarlu vaadina pada prayogalu
Posted by: Haroon At: 2, May 2003 11:04:11 PM IST
hi rahul,
mee sonnet challa bagundi andi.mainly anduloni bavam inkha bagundi.
koncham effective words use chesi vunte inkha bagundemo nandi.
"shilalaanti nannu andamaina shilpam ga maarchaavu".
ee lines badulu shilaanti shilpam loo (or)shilalaanti naalo vupiri neempavu ante inkha bagundedemo andi. as shilpa is is referred as life less.so shilanti naanu shilpam chesavu ante effective gha vundademo anni na abhiprayam andi.
this is just my opinion andi.
anyways bavam on the whole bagundi andi.
keep writing.
Posted by: Ms. silpa nugula At: 2, May 2003 3:27:49 PM IST
hi
rahul
chala baga rasaru...nijam chepali ante chala adbhutam ga rasaru...inka chala pogadalani vundi mimalini...kani matalu raka nenu mogaboyanu....
once again thanx for posting such a good kavithalu
haritha
Posted by: Ms. haritha vellanki At: 30, Apr 2003 5:11:18 PM IST
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