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Articles: Poetry | | U told me but................ | |
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| nEnu mimikrI ArTisTunilE.gAnI nI Taipu moragaDAnni mAtram imiTETu cheyyalEkapOtunnA.adsarE asalu vishayamki vaddAm
konchem kaLLeTTi chUsAvanTE I saiTulO pOyem pOsTu jEstE A jEsivAriniAuthorani cheppaDam jarugutOndi. A lekkana sadaru pITar AndrE kavitvAnikiAuthorvaraprasAda rAvu gArE. anTE sommokkaDiki sOkokaDidi Taipanna mATa.SrISrI mahAprasthAnAnni nI pErutO pablish chEskOrAdu.chUddAm
astamAnam nEnE raghOttama rAvanTunnAvu gadA.mari nuvvevaru? fashTu nI orijinal iDenTiTI cheppu.Anaka nA orijinAliTinI aDressu fOnu nambartO sahA istA
inkokaLLa rachanalni vimarSinchEduku vunDAlsindi arhata gAdu avagAhana.allAnTi avagAhana nIkundanukO vokka raghOttama rAvEmiTi kharma SrInaathuDi kavitvAnni kUDA vimarSinchochchu.arthavaindA
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 29, Mar 2006 7:03:06 PM IST
sarlE mottaaniki morugutaavani maatram oppukunnaavu
(neechamgaanO manchigaanO janaalamdarikee telusulE)
aayana ekkaDaa adi tana rachana ani cheppukOnappuDu , phalaanaa
vaari rachana ani maatram cheppalisina avasaram EmiTi?
neeku ishTamunTe chaduvu kashTam itE pO
sarE nuvvu cheppinaTTu manchi padhati kaadanukundaamu..
donga ID lu create chEsukuni vachi vErE
vaaLLa books meeda articles raayaTam manchi panaa?
neeku vunna arhata E paaTidani, pakka vaaLlani comment
cheyyaTam.
'indulO kavitwam ekkaDundO cheptaaraa saaR' ani comment
chEsE mundu neeku E maatram kawitwam vochO okkasaari
alOchinchaavaa?
nee kavana kutuuhalaM teesu chuusukOmani ynni saarlu cheppinaa
neeku budhi raadaa?
self-dabba koTTukOvaDam, pakkavaaLla kavitallO tappulu
paTtaDam, nee amitamaina ahamkaaram aa muuDuu odulukunTe nuvvu
paiki vochE chances vunnaayi.
nee edava comments valla entamandi kavulu site
ki duuram ayyaarO amdarikee telusu. enduku ee siggu lEni
pani? nee job nuvvu chhusukOlEva..
every one has their own talent and own level of poetry.Who are
you to comment? if some body ask you to chnge your style, can
you stop writing junk like neeTi buDagalO nEnu, kavana
kutuuhalaM etc ? can you ever (in your life time) write poems like our good poets in the site (like Pranav for eg)
Posted by: Mr. Avastav Lok At: 29, Mar 2006 3:37:11 PM IST
nI yanta nIchangA nE moragalEnugAnI kavitvam vishayam techchAvu ganaka konni praSnalu
varaprasAdarAvugAru A pOyem nAdani cheppukOnanta niswarthata vunnappuDu idi phalAnA vAri rachana ani cheppEsunTE goDavunDEdi kAdugadA? adenduku chElEdu?
pushpavilApAnni evari pErutO peTTukonnA asalu rachaitevarO andarikI telustundi.pErulEni vALLa kavitalni pATalni mana pErutO vEsukODam manchi paddhatEnA? nuvvU AlOchinchu
rAsina nAlugu rAtallO kavitvamundani prati vArU anukonTAru. raghOttama rAvugAri kavitalO kAmenTlu rAsinavALLallAnE kavitvam vundO lEdO pAThakulu kUDA tElchochchu..ippuDu ikkaDa gUDA prasAdarAvugAru kavi, nE pAThakuNNi.nE aDigAnu. vIlunTE Ayana samAdhAnamistAru lEdanTE vUrkunTAru.madhyalO nIkendukI gasa? nAvallA I saiTulO evaru cheDDArO cheDalEdO vALLavALLaku telsu.nIkanumAnamunTE andari daggirakI veLLi aDukkO.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 29, Mar 2006 2:31:36 PM IST
orEy vaastav alOK,
varaprasaada raavu gaaru, tana modaTi poem lO ekkaDaa
adi tana sontamani Dabbaa koTTukOlEdu (nee 'kavana kutuuhalaM'
laagaa)
TP Poems section lO ekkaDainaa, mana sonta kavitwamE
peTtalani rule raasipeTTi vundaa? edivaraku konta
mandi 'pushpa vilaapaM' etc poems peTtaTam nEnu
chuuSaanu. mari avi vaaLLu sontam gaa raasinavaa?
elaaguu donga id peTTukunna editor vikadaa
nuvvu. aa rule kuuDaa peTTinchEstE pOlEdaa?
orEy sannaasee, nEnu ninnu tiTTindi endukanTe..
'indulO kavitwam ekkaDundO cheptaaraa saaR' ani tokkalO
comment raasinanduku.
prapancham lO neeku ochinadi okkaTenaa kavitwam?
nuvvu ragOttam vi anE sangati chivaraki nee chamchaa gaaLLu ina
aa 'kiraN kumaaR' ki, aa raavu gOpaala raavuki kuuDaa telusu.
ee madhya vErE kavulu raasina books ni comment
cheyyaTam modalu peTtavu.
anta dammunTe nee asalu ID tOnE raayachu kadaa ee
comments .
maLLe anta dammu lEdu.
maLLee awards announce cheyyaTam modalu
peTTaavu.andulOnuu maLLee aa kiraN nee tOka.
duryOdhanuDi venakaala karNuDilaagaa, anta manchi kiraN kuuDaa
neelaanTi yedava venakaala vunDaTam valla tiTlu tinTunnaaDu
chuuDu.
'neeTi buDagalO nEnu' anE poem ni andaruu anta
tiTTaakaa kuuDaa, kavitwaanni imrove chEsukundaamanna
alOchana lEkunDaa inkaa pakka vaaLLa kawitvam lO tappulu
paTtaDamE dhyEyam gaa peTTukunnavu..
nuvvu baagu paDavuraa..
ee janmalO nuvvu manchi kavivi kaalEvu..nee kharma
neeku sigganTuu vunTe, janaalani chetta comments
cheyyaTam maanesi, okka manchi kavita raasi meppu pondaTaaniki
prayatnimcharaa..
maLLee ee comment kuuDaa aa kiran chEta
delete chEyistaavEmO..oddu..rOjuu chaduvukunTe neeku
budhainaa vachhi nee kukka tOka tinnagaa avutundEmO chuusukO
Posted by: Mr. Avastav Lok At: 29, Mar 2006 12:03:39 PM IST
avAstav alOk
kandaku lEni durada kattipITakannaTTundi nI yavvAram.varaprasAda rAvu gAri inkO inglIshu pOyAm rAsAru.porabATO grahapATO tElIdu gAnI achchu allAnTi kavitanE pITar AndrE anna vokatanu rAsinaTTu vO saiTulO chadivAnu.dAnnE prasAdarAvu gArini kUDA aDigAnu.nIku kaLLunTE vATiki chUpunTE A pOyem nu kUDA chadivi chUDu
pApam raghOttama rAvu gArini yenduku nAlAnTi vADitO jamakaDatAv? allA anTlu gaTTE nI gajjinodilinchukO bAgu paDtAv . chal chal
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 29, Mar 2006 10:33:30 AM IST
Varaprasad garu, this piece is excellent irrespective of whether this can be categorized as a poem or not. It reminded me of my poem (should I call it so? donno. but many ppl liked it), Until...
Keep writing and posting too.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 28, Mar 2006 11:00:45 PM IST
orEy vaastav alOk (aliyaas raghOttaM)
neeku enni saarlu cheppinaa buddhi raaduraa
evariki tOchina kavitwam vaaLLu raasukunTaaru.
eDiTar ki lEni baadha neeku enduku (gajji ki lEni durada jaalim lOShan ki annaTTu)
nuvvu raasina 'neeTi buDagalO nEnu' anE chetta chuuDu.
andulO Emainaa kavitwam EDisindaa?
ee ahamkaaram vodili mundu nuvvu pOyi nErchukuni raa.
nee bEvarsu mohaaniki google search kuuDaa vachEnTi..
Mr. Varaprasad,
Your poem clearly reflects your feelings.Its good.
Dont worry by the bull shit comments of Mr. Vastav Alok.
He is one of the famous persons of this site (and an Editor too) with this duplicate ID.
Go like a royal elephant.Dont bother these bhow bhows like Vastal alok.
Posted by: Mr. Avastav Lok At: 28, Mar 2006 6:35:15 PM IST
gUgal serchulO dorakalEdanTE idi mI sontamE aivunDAla.indulO kavitvamekkaDundO konchem cheptArA sAr ?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Mar 2006 10:13:31 AM IST
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