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| hey Mr.Reddy,
'cudn't agree more' antae ....meeru raasindhi acceptable n good ani !!
Thatz what i meant atleast !!!!
have fun -:)
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 19, May 2003 9:22:40 AM IST
Nava. Can you give reason why you don't agree...
Sridhar..What is your opinion on the lines?
Were you writing about God...
What is that "WAS" word...?
Posted by: Mr. S Reddy Ch At: 18, May 2003 4:03:15 AM IST
I cudn't agree more with Mr.S Reddy suggested last line ! -:)
good work Mr.Raman!
great day ..
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 17, May 2003 11:10:32 PM IST
May be..with this line...
Is everything for you lifelong...
(If you are talking about arranged marriage...)
Posted by: Mr. S Reddy Ch At: 17, May 2003 7:52:40 PM IST
How about replacing last line with....
Is everyone for you lifelong....
Posted by: Mr. S Reddy Ch At: 17, May 2003 7:48:11 PM IST
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