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Articles: Poetry | | CHIRUNAVVULA VARAMICHI..... | |
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Bagundi sneha :) nee kavitha....
bye
naveena
Posted by: Mrs. naveena uppalapati At: 13, Feb 2004 8:50:15 PM IST
bagundi sneha garu.
Posted by: Miss madhavi nidumolu At: 18, May 2003 9:34:46 PM IST
Hi Nava.
'kalalu kane uhalo ..' eee sentence ...
This sentence can be understood like the following...if I am not mistaken..
just think of flashback within flashback in our telugumovies....it is something like that.. Is it sneha garu? ;-)
why do v use pagati kalalu...According to you , we should say pagati uhalu..rathri kalalu.. ;-)
Posted by: Mr. S Reddy Ch At: 18, May 2003 6:30:42 AM IST
Hi Nava, ur different like ur name, mee comments nava puttisthunnayi....nidra pothunnupuddu oohinchuko lemu anna mee comment nav(v)a tepisthunnadi, bahusha alanti anubhoothi meeku kaliginattu ledu, really pity you, devudaina Sri Krishnudu prematho Sathyabhama kaallu pattukunnadu ata alantidi karunichava ani adagadam tappu anna mata meeu ante mari oka sari nav(v) peduthunnadi.
PS: comments yivvalne drushti lo pettukoni kavithalu chadavoddu andi.....you must encourage them.
Posted by: Mr. VidyaPrasad Prasad At: 18, May 2003 6:13:59 AM IST
The poem is very refreshing, keep it up! mee kavitha chaala bagundhi Sneha garu.
Posted by: Mr. VidyaPrasad Prasad At: 18, May 2003 6:02:27 AM IST
sneha garu,
'nilachaava????' antha question mark endhukandi ?
'kalalu kane uhalo ..' eee sentence lo patuthvam thakkuva ga vundhi ...either u shud have used kalalu ...or uhaalu ...both doesn't fit side by side in my opinion. kalalu ante nidropoyi kanaevi ...vooha anedhi melukuvaga vundi chesae andhamaina ..adhbhuthamaina(voohinchukunae vaariki suma !) alochana ..!
alaagae .. 'karuninchi' anae padam priyuditho/priyu raalitho vaada thaara anaedhi naaku sandhehamae ! endhukantae 'karuninchi'(doesn't have to do us a favour! damn it !! -:) ) dhariki vochae priyudu/priyuraalu kantae ....prematho,aaraadhana tho dhariki cherae priyudu/priyuraalu aithe baaguntundhi ani naa abhipraayam !
alaagae 'ee kavitha ni chulakanaga choodatam' anaedhi ....mistrust towards ur beloved prove chesthundhi ...negative ...
ika migathadhi ...parledhu ...OK
PS: Meeru ee kavitha raasindhi 'Krishna Paramaathma ki (meeru gopika ga voohinchukoni!) aithae maatram ...naa vimarshalu annee ...votti povu gaaka ! -:)
-:) -:)
sandhadae sandhadii ...
vunta mari ..
nava
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 17, May 2003 11:29:52 PM IST
heartwarming, scintillating one....
poem adhirindandi...
Posted by: Mr. S Reddy Ch At: 17, May 2003 8:10:47 PM IST
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