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Articles: Poetry | | Sleepless nights | |
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| hi,
i did say ut as typographical error but after reading and looking back at my diary i found it is right.Since lots of things are considered implied and this is one of them where in her is implied.
Anyhow thanks for reading regularly that makes me feel like posting some more poems or articles.
Posted by: Mr. Naresh Proddaturi At: 3, Jun 2003 2:49:56 AM IST
hi,
thanks for the correction it is a typographical error since i knew the poem i couldnt find the mistake i will work so that errors dont occur in future.
thanks a lot for reading and for msg
Naresh
Posted by: Mr. Naresh Proddaturi At: 31, May 2003 11:31:20 AM IST
How about this...
think of last line contradicting..whole poem...
like this...
only to their dismay find her in my arms...
in stead of
only to their dismay find in my arms held
It is not dream but it is real..
njoy...
Posted by: Mr. S Reddy Ch At: 28, May 2003 7:32:56 PM IST
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