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| chAlA bAvundanDi mee nandi vardhanam..soopar..
Posted by: Mr. chandukc Chandukc At: 24, Jun 2006 7:20:30 AM IST
Thank you ALL for your kind comments. :)
kiraN gAru, mI salahAni amalu parachaDAniki tappakunDA prayatnistAnu.
aandhruDu gAru, mIrannaTTE avi vEru vEru dhRukpadhaalE anDi.. nandivardhanam cheTTu ni chUDagAnE kaligE bhAvAlu avi.. aa puvvullO konniTini dEvuDi pUjaki upayOgistaamu.. konni alA inTi mundunna muggu meeda raali vunTAyi.. inkonni vADi paDipOTaaniki siddhamgA vunTAyi.. cheTTuki pUchina pUlannii okkO sthaayini anubhavistaayi kadaa.. I hope I am clear enough.. Thank you.
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 24, Jun 2006 6:29:12 AM IST
good effort anDi.
but modati stanzaku chivari stanza contradictory gaa ledoo?...tarvaata..sequence of events koodaa...modata aatrangaa eduruchoostunnaayi ani..tarvaata samaaloachanalu chaestunnaayi ani..tarvata alasi poyaayi ani...ilaa vaeru vaeru dRukpathato varNinchinaTTu laedoo?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 23, Jun 2006 7:11:26 PM IST
kavita bAguMdaMDi
Posted by: Mr. Niranjan N At: 22, Jun 2006 8:03:10 AM IST
ekkaDivi ii kusumaalu , hRudayakavaaTamununDi raalina tolakarijallulaa ? maapai visirina ANimutyaalaa ? nishi kalaM nunDi jaarina manchubinduvulaa ? kaadu kaadu avi chakkani madhurabhaavaalu manakai virisina nandivardhanaM ii kusumaM
Diyar ....nishii...............ekkaDikO veLLipOyaavU................chaalaachaalaabaavundi .....!!!!!!!!! nandivardhanaM .......
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 22, Jun 2006 5:28:06 AM IST
:) inTloa kurchoani. aatramgaa manasu aDigina kuSalapraSnalu anni kalipi chirugaalitoa samaaloachana chaestaenae eDategani padalatoa maaku kavita andinchaaru anTae ... praSaantamgaa kurchoani. prakRutini palakaristae eDateripi laekunDa kavitaamRutam kuripinchagalaraemO
Posted by: venkat suresh chowdary At: 22, Jun 2006 2:20:18 AM IST
inTloa kurchoani. aatramgaa manasu aDigina kuSalapraSnalu anni kalipi chirugaalitoa samaaloachana chaestaenae eDategani padalatoa maaku kavita andinchaaru anTae ... praSaantamgaa kurchoani. prakRutini palakaristae eDateripi laekunDa kavitaamRutam kurichinchagalaraemO
Posted by: venkat suresh chowdary At: 22, Jun 2006 2:16:45 AM IST
nishI...enta baagaa raaSAvu!....chaalaa chaalaa baagundi.....padaalakUrpu baagundi keep coming
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 21, Jun 2006 11:55:39 PM IST
maMchi kavita. kiraN gaaru cheppinaTTu prayatniMchanDi.
Posted by: PRANAV At: 21, Jun 2006 10:49:32 PM IST
naMdivardhanAlaMta tellani svachChameina bhAvaMtO chAlAbAguMdi
annaTTu iditelusA!
naMdivardhanAlalO reMDurakAlu
rEkha, mudda namdivardhanaM
kommala niMDA pachchani Akula pakkane tellani naMdivardhanAlu
Oh eMta chUDa muchchaTagAvuMTAyO!!
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 21, Jun 2006 6:48:01 PM IST
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