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| kavita ettugaDalOnE eMtOsowkumAryaM vuTTipaDutOMdi.
chAlAbAgAvrAsAvu!
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 28, Jun 2006 8:03:24 AM IST
andarikee thanks. manchi Diskashan chaesAru.
seetu gAru naenu ippaTidAkA rAsina padahAru kavitallO idi kaevalaM renDOdi mAtramae kavitvaM mIda rAsina vATillO. kAbaTTi mIku naenu kavitvaM mIda ekkuva rAstunnAnani enduku anipinchindO telIdu.
subrahmaNyaM gAru, anTae avagAhana vachchaedAkA kavitvaM mIda kotta kavulu enduku rAyakUDadO ardhaM kAlaedu. chAlAmandi rAsAru kAbaTTi kottadanaM unDadu anna vAdana itara vishayAlaku kUDA vartistundi kadA. alA kAkunDA kaevalaM kavitvaM mIda enduku rAyoddu anTunnArO EmainA kAraNaM undA?
nIhaar gAru, mIru cheppinaTTu Sraddha tIsukunTAnu.
vaastav gAru, padaalni veliginchaedi kavitvaM anna bhAvaMtO alA rAsAnu. mIru cheppinaTTu chaestae modaTi sTaaMjA avasaraM kuDaa unDadu. appuDu asalu ardhamae mAripOyae pramAdaM undi.
Posted by: Mrs. Jyotsna Kumar Mantha At: 27, Jun 2006 5:56:09 PM IST
nA abhiprAyamlO kavigAru 'kavitvamlO vATini veliginchi'lO kavitvamlO anna padAnni, 'pAThaka samudram eduruchUpulu'lO pAThaka anna padAnni tIsEstE bAgunDEdi.appuDadi kEvalam kavitvamu, pAThakula gurinchi mAtramE cheppakanDA marinta jeneralaijai vunDEdi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 27, Jun 2006 3:51:24 PM IST
Finally we are coming to a logical conclusion....
neehaar gaaru, meeru cheppina vishayaalu sababugaanE unnaayi. ilaanTi sandEhaalatO nEnu bhUshaN gaaritO daadaapu renDELLa kritaM mails lO jaripina charcha priMT teesi daachukunnaa. veelaitE inTikiveLLaaka ikkaDa pOsT chEstaa.
ee charcha tarvAta nAkEmanipistOMdanTE 'paaThakuDiki idi kavitaa kaadaa anna anumaanaM vachchElOgaa atani manasulOki dUsukeLLipOyEdi kavita ' :))
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Jun 2006 1:52:39 PM IST
OK... Let me put it this way... 'maa manavaDu' , 'hanee' , 'kaabOyE peLLi kUturu' ee mUDu kavitalu/rachanallOnU anni lain&s kalipitE pEraagraaf laagE unTaayi. anni kavitallOnU mEGaM yuddhaM prakaTinchaDaM laanTi bhAvavyakteekaraNalO vaividhyaM unna prayOgaalu lEvu. mari 'maa manavaDu' kavita elaa ayyindi? migataa renDU kavitalu enduku kaalEdu?
anTE pEraagraaf lu gaa unDaDaM, bhaava vyakteekaraNalO vaividyaM veeTiki minchi kavitvaannee , vachanaannee viDadeesEdi EdO undanEgaa ardhaM. andukE ilaa jenaralaij cheyyalEmannadi. muKyaMgaa kavitvaM laanTi kaLala vishayaMlO!
maroka vishayaM 'hanee' 'kaabOyE peLLikUturu' veeTillO kUDaa kavitvaM undanE nEnu anukunTunnaanu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Jun 2006 12:41:30 PM IST
subbu gaaru, reMDu vishayaalu chebutaanu. aa dRukkONaMlO aalOchiMchi cheppaMDi.
1) meeru ab`sTraakTu aarTu, maaDarn aarT guriMchi vinE uMTaaru. pikaasO laaMTi vaaru ilaaMTi chitraalaku aadyulu. alaa ani naalugu geetalu niluvugaa aDDaMgaa geesEsi, manishi talanu gurraM mOMDaaniki atikiMchi geesi idE maaDarn aarTu ani evarainaa aMTE oppukuMTaamaa? lEdu. mari tEDaa ekkaDuMdi? alaaMTi tEDaanE meeru cheppina ismaayil udaaharaNaku, ikkaDa raasina padyaaniki uMdi. kavitvaaniki SabdaaDaMbaraalu avasaraM lEdu. alaa ani chakkani kavitaa SilpamavasaraM lEdaMTE nEnoppukOnu. (jyOtsna gaaru, idi mimmalnuddESiMchi raasinadi kaadu. ikkaDa raasinavi aMTE nannoo kalupukoni chebutunnaanu)
ika meeru cheppina udaaharaNalu guriMchi..avi khachchitaMgaa kavitalE. praivETu vaanalO manaMdarikee kaligE anubhavaannE kavi manamevvaramoo paTTiMchukOni kottakONaMlO parichayaM chEstaaDu. adE aa kavitalaku balaM. alaagE maa manavaDu kavita kooDaa. udaaharaNalu ivvaalaMTE iMkaa bOleDu cheppochchu. yadukula bhooshaN chelleli geetaalu chadivi chooDaMDi. nuvvevari jaTTu anna kavita chadavaMDi? aa kavitalO balamEMTi? anubhootidE SaasanaM. (muMdumaaTalO apputecchukunna vaakyaM :))
ilaaMTi kavitallO sTrakcharu maamoolu pEraagraaphullaa unnaa mananeMduku aakaTTukuMTunnaayi? eMdukaMTE veeTilO roopaanni marapiMchE balamaina anubhootO, oka vinootna dRukkONamO uMdi. chaalaa maMdi kottakavulu (nannoo kalupukoni) ikkaDE porapaaTlu chEstaarani naa abhipraayaM. aToo bhaava prakaTanaa spashTaMgaa lEkaa, iToo Silpamoo lEka chatikilabaDataaM.
2) SrI SrI gaaru chaMdObaMdhaalu teMchi telugu kavitanu kottabaaTa paTTiMchaarani aMdaroo oppukuMTaaru. alaa ani aayanku chaMdassu teleenidEM kaadu. avanni aupOsana paTTaakE vachanakavitvaM raaSaaru. aayanni choosi anukariMchina vaaLLu kaalapareekshalO eMta mEraku nilabaDDaaru?. aayana taraMlOMchi oka iravai maMdi kavula pErlu cheppaMDi choostaa?
alaagE ismaayil gaari kavitalO kooDaa paMktulunnaayi kadaa ani aMdaroo pEraagraaphulu raastoo pOtE kavitvaanni dEvuDE rakshiMchaali. appuDu eenaaDu vaartalni kooDaa kavitvamanE pramaadamuMdi.
modaTa naDaka chakkagaa nErchukunna tarvaata vinyaasaala guriMchi aalOchiMchaali. meerE cheppinaTTu 'naluguru kavulni chadivi kaasta avagaahana vacchaaka' kavitallO svEchCha teesukOvaDaM maMchidi. modaTa kluptamaina balamaina kavitalu raayaDaM mukhyaM.
naa iMtakumuMdu kaameMTu mugistoo evariki vaarE aalOchiMchaalani pratyEkiMchi aDigaanu. eMdukaMTE kavitvaM hRudayasaMbaMdhi. tarkaaniki saMbaMdhiMchina vishayaalu dorikinaTTugaa, kavitvaaniki saMbaMdhiMchinavi chaalaa vishayaalu veMTanE sphuriMchavu. chaalaa varaku sahajaataMgaa telavaDamO, anubhavaM meeda telusukOvaDamO jarugutuMdi. mitruDokarannaTlu krikeTTu guriMchi eMta thiyaree chadivinaa byaaTu paTTukoni maidaanaMlOki veLtE gaani asalu krikeTTaMTE EmiTO teleedu. kavitvamoo alaaMTidE. ilaaMTi praSnalaku samaadhaanaalu ekkaDO chadivi telusukODaM kaMTE, manaMtaTa manamE SOdhistE chaalaa vishayaalu tETatellamavutaayi.
---- ee kaameMTu pOsTu chEsEsarikE kiraN gaaritO charchalO oka vaakyaM raaSaaru. 'kaabOyE peLLikooturu, hanee' kavitalu kaavaa ani. nEnu meeku marO praSna vEstaanu. ismaayil raasina vaaTlOMchi iravai goppa kavitalu mimmalni selakTu chEyamaMTE ee kavitalaku aMdulO sthaanamuMTuMdaa?
Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 27, Jun 2006 12:37:23 PM IST
nEnichchina link lO 'maa manavaDu', 'kaabOyE peLLikUturu', 'hanee' ilaanTi rachanalani meeru kavitvaMgaa angeekaristaaraa lEdaa annadi cheppanDi. oka vELa angeekarinchakapOyinaTTaitE nEnu mundE cheppinaTTu charcha poDiginchi upayOgaM lEdu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Jun 2006 12:15:18 PM IST
meeru naa pOyinT apaardhaM chEsukunnaaru. nEnu jenaralaij cheyyalEmannadi kEvalaM kavitvaM vishayaMlO... navyata, kluptata ivE kavitvaaniki pradhaanaM gaanee anni lain&s kalipitE pEraagraaf laa undaa, andulO figurative language undaa lEdaa ilaanTivi anta muKyaM kaadu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Jun 2006 12:06:33 PM IST
ismaayil gaari 'maa manavaDu' kavita kUDaa kavita kaadanTE inka charchinchaDaanikEmee migaladu :))
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Jun 2006 11:47:59 AM IST
kiraN gaarU, alaa jenaralaij cheyyalEmani naa uddESaM. ee liMk lO 'maa manavaDu' anE kavita chUDanDi. andulO annee vaakyaalE.. anee kalipitE neehaar gaaru cheppinaTTu oka pEraagraaf laagE unTundi. kaanee adi chadavagaanE oka mahattaramaina anubhUti kalugutundi. adE kavitvaM.
http://www.eemaata.com/books/raatrivaccina.pdf
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Jun 2006 11:46:59 AM IST
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