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Articles: Poetry | | aaKari kavita | |
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Enduku aakhari kavita ?????????????
subbu anTE meerokkarE kaani praNav oka kavi...kavi anTe spandinche prati hRudayam oka vyaktikaadu konni manasula samudaayam kavi kalam aagaTam anTe konni hRudaya spandanalu aagaTam adi saadyamEnaa sababEna O saari alOchinchanDi kaviki kuaDaa appuDappuDu viSraanti kaavaali anipistundi nEnu oppukunTunnaanu kaani adi mugimpu kaadu kaakuaDadu
manasulO ' puTTina ' bhaavaalanu baashagaa 'maarchi ' andamaina bhaavanagaa ' malachi' kavitagaa ' SRuSTinchi ' kashTapaDi ' kanna ' kavitanu kaLLaara chuasukuni murisi .....
mana kavitalu mana biDDalu kadaa? mari mana pillalani pogiDaarano tiTTarano vodilEsukunTaamaa ?
manamua manushulamE andulOnu bhaavukulamu spandinchaTamE mana pradhama lakshaNam lEkunTe manamasalu kavitelaaraastaam :) marinkendukee meemaanSa meeku ?
tvaralO mee kalamki tirigi praaNam pOstaarani akankshistua ..:)
---Venni :)
smail pleej :)
Posted by: Mrs. Vennela...:) At: 7, Jul 2008 6:02:09 PM IST
Beautiful poetry !!!!!!!!!! .small suggestion poet should never make his/her readers to feel writing his personal feelings at the last rather he should just convey it through his poetry. .It is upto u to write or to leave but i feel u shouldn't have expressed ur opinion of not writing .please try to correct where u are going wrong.I believe u even lost writing ur personal opinions as there are so many people who are enjoying ur poems.Na matalu hard ga vuntundhi but they are facts I truely believe.
Posted by: Sudeshna At: 6, Aug 2007 10:56:50 AM IST
vasantam rAka tappadu praNav.
kavita adbhutamgA undi. mee aNvEshaNa lOnE adbhutamaina kavitwam kUDA bayaTapaDutOndi. mIru rAyaDam mAnaddu
Posted by: Mrs. Prasuna Ravindran Palathropu At: 6, Jul 2006 1:25:42 PM IST
chAlA mis` avutAmu mI kavitalu.....
Best Wishes to u...
Posted by: Anitha At: 4, Jul 2006 9:09:12 PM IST
maLLI vasantam tappakunDA vastundi.. mIru kUDA maakichchina maaTa prakAram tappakunDA kalavAlani kOrukunTunnAnu.. ennO sphoortidAyakamaina rachanalanu maakichchi veLtunnanduku chaalaa kRutajNjatalu.. GOOD LUCK!! :)
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 4, Jul 2006 7:30:27 PM IST
oka abhimaanigaa baadhapaDutunnaa.....
all the best.
Posted by: Mr. vasanth vasanth At: 4, Jul 2006 4:50:27 PM IST
mugimpu baagundi. kaanI muginchaDavE baalEdu.
Posted by: పూలవాన At: 4, Jul 2006 3:32:10 PM IST
oa pani chaeyanDi..laepotae?...antagaa kaavaalanukunTae subraman`yam paerutoa aakhari kavita raasi unTae baavunDaedi....praNav kavitalu kanTinyoo chaeyanDi....:)
anyway all the best....but keep writing..writing ...
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 4, Jul 2006 1:09:25 PM IST
piTTa
pATaki
enni chappaTlu ASistuMdi!
ilA viDagoTTi uMTE bAguMDEdi.
Wish you all the very best Pranav/Subbu.
Akhari kavita ani cheppaDaM Akharu kAvAlani, marinni maMchi kavitalu mI kalaM nuMchi rAvAlani manasArA kOrukuMTU..... mI abhimAni.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 4, Jul 2006 11:53:35 AM IST
mugimpu chaalaa baagundanDi
appaTi varaku aavESangaa veLtunna aalOchanalni,manasuni
'vasantamanTU vastE
maLLI kaluddaaM' anna aakhari vaakyamtO kadilinchaaru
GoodLuck Subrahmanyam garu
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 4, Jul 2006 10:19:53 AM IST
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