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Articles: Poetry | | The Turmoil | |
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| People come, people go
But you should never be
A mattress at the door
baavundi ee usage ee vaakyamloa entoa optimism undi.
aitae koddigaa jaagarta teesukuni unTae kavita inkaa baavochchaedi. udaaharaNaku
Everything is false, everything is in vain
There is nothing but only pain
everything is false ? aa?..adelaa? andunaa paina aa? kaLLakedurugaa kanipistunnadi faals anaDamloa artham aenTi ? aedoa roaju maaya mavutaayanae taatvika chintanaa ?...idi sheer pessimism paigaa pain ani varNichaDam contradictory to the essence of the poem .
ee kavitaloa unDae pradhaana vairudhyam idi. oa pakka lae anToo motivate chaestoo inkoa pakka antaa faals` ani mesaej` ivvaDam kudarlaedu.
chivarloa
Throw the sorrows behind
You are a star that is yet to shine,
Pull up your strings
And accept the gift that life brings.
anna tarvaata maLLee god gurinchi raayaDam enduku ? daevuDanTae nammakam unDaalanae vishayam induloa posagaTlaedu. aitae eduTi manishini inta dhairyam nooripoastoo akasmaattugaa daevuDu gurtochchinaTTu raasinaTTundi. andunaa induloa person kooDaa maarindi.
raaseTappuDu vairudhyaalu laekunDaa jaagarta paDanDi.
mottangaa effort is appreciable . keep it up !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 18, Jul 2006 10:42:26 AM IST
This is a poem with depth.Happy to read such poem.
-v.rvidyarti
Posted by: Mr. ramu vidyarthi veluri At: 17, Jul 2006 11:42:02 PM IST
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