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Articles: Poetry | | palleTUrisTEshan kOpaM | |
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jyOtsna, chakkani kavita raaSaaru. kavitaa Silpaanni par`fekT`gaa paTTukunnaaru. anubhooti kavitvaM guriMchi maaTlaaDutoo ismaayil gaaru ilaa annaaru.
==) anubhooti kavitvaMlO ee anubhooti EmiTi? anubhooti anE padaanni chaalaa arthaallO vaaDutunnaaru. 'anubhavaM' ani oka arthaM. 'Feeling' ani marO arthaM. kaani, anubhooti aMTE avi reMDoo kaavu. ivi reMDoo kalisE biMduvu. bhoutika prapaMchamoo, manishi aMtaraMga prapaMchamoo, veeTi reMTi kalayika. vishayee, ( subject), vishayaala ( object ) sammELanaM. anubhavaM samishTi kaavacchu. anubhooti eppuDoo vaiyaktikamE. anubhava vastuvu okaTainaa, evari anubhooti vaaridi. adi eppuDoo kottagaa uMTuMdi. okari anubhootilaa marokari anubhooti uMDadu. ee navanavOnmEshamaina anubhootini aavishkariMchaTamE kavi kartavyaM.
aitE, ee vishayee, vishayaala sannikarsha eTuvaMTidi? iMdulO chaalaa daSalunnaayi. udaaharaNaki, maamiDipaMDunu mooDu rakaalugaa anubhootiMchavacchunu. daani raMgunee, roopaanni choosi aanaMdiMchaTaM okaTi. maamiDi paMDunu kOsukuni tini aanaMdiMchaTaM reMDOdi. maamiDi paMDu astitvaMlO tana astitvaM mELaviMchaTaM mooDOdi. aMTE, tana anubhavamoo, maamiDi paMDu anubhavamoo aikyaM cheyyaTaM. ee mooDO rakaM anubhootilO aMtaa aanaMdamE. aMtaa SaaMtiyE. manassukee prapaMchaanikee bhEdaM lEdu. ee mooDO rakaM anubhootiyE kavitvaanubhooti.
==) haiku prakriyaku pitaamahuDani cheppadaggavaarilO okaDaina bashO iMchu miMchu ilaaMTidE annaaDu. veduru cheTTu guriMchi telusukOvaalaMTE ninnu vadili vedurulO pravESiMchu ani. ( exact saameta kaaste vetiki kOT chEyaali prastutaaniki aMdubaaTulO lEdu.)
ee kavitalO ismaayil gaaru udahariMchinaTTu, kavayitri tana anubhavaanni, sTEshan anubhavaMtO aikyaM chEstOMdi. E vidhaMgaa choosinaa ee kavita anubhooti kavitvaanikee, kavitvaMlO niSSabdaM paaTiMchaDaaniki chakkani udaaharaNa. alaaMTidi ee kavitanu paTTukoni EviTee ee charchalu?
ViSva gaaru, asalu kavitva saarvatrikamavaDamEmiTi? konni udaaharaNalu choopiMchaMDi? alaagE kavayitri anubhooti kannaa, vastuvu anubhootiki praamukhyatanivvaDamEmiTi? ee vaakyaanni elaa arthaM chEsukOmaMTaaru? 'ee speeDu yugaMlO nuvvu kaakapOtE naakOsaM marokaDu vastaaDanna arthaM' meeku tOchiMdi. ee kavitaku idokkaTE arthamaa? sTEshan ni taatagaari laaga, doosuku veLLE railunu maaTa peDachevinapeTTE manavaDi laagaa oohiMchukOlEmaa?
kavita chadavagaanE meeku oka anubhooti kaligitE, mee astitvaanni aa sTEshan astitvaMlO kavayitri choopiMchagaligitE kavayitri tana pani samarthavaMtaMgaa neravErchinaTTE nani nEnankuMTunnaanu.
subbu gaaru, mee kaameMTu kooDaa naaku arthamavalEdu. anubhooti meeda raasina kavita aMTE EmiTi? ee kavitalO vyaktaparichiMdi aa sTEshan anubhooti kaadaa?
ika kavitalO naaku nacchani reMDu chinna vishayaalu. uttama kaLaku uMDavalasina pradhaana lakshaNaallO okaTi, aa kaLanu iMTar`preT chEsE vidhaanaanni paaThakuDiki vadilEyaDaM. kavi doori paaThakuDi anubhootini bhaMgaparachakooDadu. TaiTil lO kOpaM anna padaM alaaMTidE. subhraMgaa palleToori sTEshan anocchu. adi kOpaMgaa cheppina maaTO, jeevitaM aMtaa anubhaviMchi taatvikaMga cheppina maaTO chadivina paaThakuDu nirNayiMchukuMTaaDu.
reMDavadi. oka vidhaMgaa choostE, subbu aalreDee udahariMchina tana kavita iMchumiMchu ilaaMTidE. bhaavareetyaa Silpareetyaa.. sO, orijinaaliTee vishayaMlO kaasta vanne taggiMdi ee kavitalO.
mottaM meeda maMchi kavita raaSaaru. marO saari abhinaMdanalu.
Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 27, Jul 2006 6:49:15 AM IST
kluptamgaa chakkagaa vundanDi.. :) mee kavitalu manchi charchaku daari teestaayi! :) keep writing.. :)
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 24, Jul 2006 9:41:14 PM IST
ikkaDa jyOtsna gaaru raasindi oka vastuvu meeda.. oka anubhUti meeda raasina kavitaitE vaiyaktikaM, saarvajaneenaM ani viDadiyyochchugaanee ilaa oka vastuvu meeda raasina kavita saarvajaneenaM elaa avutundO ardhaM kaalEdu. viSva gaaru, vivarinchanDi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 24, Jul 2006 7:47:10 PM IST
nEnU kiraN gaaritO Ekeebhavistaanu viSva gaaru.. renDu kavitalakee Silpa paramaina saarUpyata tappitE bhaavaparaMgaa chaalaa tEDaa undi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 24, Jul 2006 3:18:17 PM IST
:) ee madhya railu prayaaNaalu ekkuva chEstunnaaraa?
eks pres railu
aagakunDaa veLLipOtE
maarumUla plaaT faaM
nirliptata
ani nEneppuDO raasina pada chitraM gurtochchindi..
Posted by: PRANAV At: 24, Jul 2006 10:27:33 AM IST
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