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| mee vivaraNaki dhanyavAdAlu viSwa gAru... mee suniSita pariSIlana, constructive criticism naaku nachchindanDi.. andukE mee vimarSala venuka bhaavaalu telsukOvAlani aDigAnu..
ayitE, cheppina/telsina vishayaalanE maLLI cheppETappuDu 'navyata' lEkapOtE aakaTTukOdanTAru.. ee vishayamlO maatram meetO Ekeebhavistaanu.. maa guruvugAru praNav gAru kUDA idE cheptaaru (aayanaki nEnu Ekalavya SishyurAlini lEnDi) :))
meerannaTlu modaTi renDu saadaa seedaa vaakyaalu ayinaa, kavita chadavaDam pUrtayyEsariki baavundanE pheeling kaligindanDi naaku..
by the way, 'pani jaragadaa' annadi achchamgaa meeranna maaTalu kAvu.. nEnu phlOlO alaa raasEsaanu.. kshaminchanDi..
ika 'cheruvugaTTu' vaddaku vastE, nEnu aa kavitaki raasina kaamenTlO cheppinaTlE
ilAnTi padaalu chErchaDam valana bhaavam , anubhuuti maaraka pOyinaa oka aahlaadakaramaina dRuSyam mana kaLLamundu nilustundi.. idi naa abhiprAyam maatramE.. alA ani kavita ninDA alaanTi padAlu lEka viSEshaNAlu upayOgistE maatram meelaanE kaThinamgaa khanDistaanu. :))
'chandrOdayam ' ni udaaharaNagA teesukunnanduku inkOsaari dhanyavaadaalu.
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 27, Jul 2006 8:08:37 PM IST
naaku nachchindanDi ee kavita..
subbu gAru, inkA indulO kluptata elA teesukuraavochchanDi? really want to know..
:))) viSwa gaaru.. meeru bhalE mATlADataaranDi!!
kavitvamlOni emOshan& gurinchi kadaa praSaanti annadi.. prati raata lOni emOshan& gurinchi kaadEmO!? ayinA monna 'cheruvugaTTu' avasaram lEdannaaru.. ippuDu 'mEghaalu... lOyalu.. gaTrA' lEkunDA pani jaragadaa anTunnaaru.. ivEmii lEkunDA raastE okkOsAri kavita 'kaTTe koTTe techche' chandaana unTundi.. EmanTAru? :))
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 26, Jul 2006 5:53:28 PM IST
telisina prakRutini varNistE tappA! adi kavitvaM kAdA! emOshan ni chUDAli kAnI prati dAnni pAta chiMtakAya pachchaDi ani koTTi pArEstE elAgaMDi?
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 26, Jul 2006 0:23:17 AM IST
konni jaagartalu teesukoavaali...
nalla paradaa..goDugudae ani vivarangaa raayalsina avasaram laedu...ekkuva DaaTs peTTaDam valla aagi aagi cheppina anubhooti raadu...vaakya nirmaaNam valana vachchae effect nu punctuation marks augment chaeya galagaali.
kavitaloa konta pariNati raavaalsina avasaram undanDi.
mottam meeda
good effort anDi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 25, Jul 2006 4:07:19 PM IST
nAyanA viSvaM goDugu erragA undA, nallagA undA ani ravikiraN ninnu aDigADA? anavasara vishayAlu mATlADakUDadani musugu SatakaMlO cheppA. chaduvukOlaedA nAyanA? nAyanA ravikiraNU, nuvvu goDugu rangula gurinchi ilAgae marinni rangu rangula kavitalu rAyAli bAbU.
Posted by: Miss Musugu Veeravanita At: 25, Jul 2006 12:39:15 PM IST
evarigurinchi varshistaayi mEGaalu?
pillalagurinchi kaakapOtE
goDugulaDDupeTTukunEvaaLLa kOsamaa?
inta kluptata saadhinchaali kavitvaMlO... aa diSagaa saadhana cheyyanDi..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 25, Jul 2006 11:53:53 AM IST
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