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Articles: Poetry | | Kala | |
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| Rajasekhar gaaru
really last paragraph is very nice..
Posted by: Mr. benerjee At: 18, Jun 2003 3:43:51 PM IST
Hello Mr Raja Sekhar,
Ur poem is outstanding..Kakapote
Nenu choosenu oka priyamayina kala,
Adee choosenu enni saarlo,
veetilo second line (Adee choosenu enni sarlo) koddi ga mariste bagundedemo andi..remainging is simply superb..
The highlight lines r
Kalale kanaka nizamayite,
Nizame kanaka edurayite,
Edurayina roju kanapadite,
Kanipinchina tanu sontamayite,
Keep it up....
Bye...
Krishna Pisupati
Posted by: Mr. Krishna Pisupati At: 17, Jun 2003 11:15:39 PM IST
nenu chadivaanu Rajasekhar "kala"
adee bhonchesi nidra vastunna velalo...
ippudu comment rayadam ela
naa madilo enni voohalo.......
Posted by: Mr. benerjee At: 17, Jun 2003 12:21:25 PM IST
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