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Articles: Poetry | | rangula velugula cheekaTi | |
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| kaLLu moosukunToo unnappuDu ... melligaa cheekaTi druShTi ni aavarinchaDaanni ' druShTi tO cheekaTi aalinganam ' ani raasaa anDi. naaku aa kshaNam lO alaagE anipinchindi.
Posted by: Ms. Asooryampasya Asooryampasya At: 11, Sep 2006 6:15:47 PM IST
TaiTil baagundi. chaalaa chinna vishayaanni kavitaatmakamgaa cheppina tiiru abhinandanIyam. 'dRushTitO chiikaTi aalinganam ' laanTi prayOgaallO chakkani bhaavukata kanipinchindi. nidralOki jaari, kalalu kanaDaaniki mundu puTTukochchE ennO 'aalOchanala kOlaahalaanni' spRuSinchina ii kavita, aa samayamlOni aalOchanallOnE molakalettindEmO ani naa anumaanam !
Posted by: Phanindra KSM At: 11, Sep 2006 11:22:47 AM IST
Thank you everybody for your comments.
raghOttama raavu gaaru, gajibiji aalOchanallOnchi puTTukochchina kavitvaanni pondiggaa raayaDam jeevitam lOni Randomness ki anyaayam chEsinaTlu avtundEmO anipinchindi. pondika gurinchi prastutaaniki ee abhipraayam tO unnaa. aitE, meeru cheppindi nijamE .. paaThakulaki naa bhaavam chEraalanTE gajibiji unDakooDadu. I will try to improve on clarity without losing the flavor of Randomness. Thankyou.
Posted by: Ms. Asooryampasya Asooryampasya At: 9, Sep 2006 8:45:48 PM IST
very good
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 9, Sep 2006 8:13:53 PM IST
TaiTil chaala baavundi kavita kUDa
Posted by: Mr. Harsha saatakarNi At: 9, Sep 2006 4:47:14 PM IST
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