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| alaa cheyyaDam konchem kaadu kaadu chaalaa kaShTam EmO nanDee. asalu cheyyagalamO lEdO kooDaa naaku anumaanam.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 20, Sep 2006 4:28:11 PM IST
tappuDu paddatullO , OrchukOlEni vidhaanaalatO sareina paddatullO charcha lO gelavalEka naa ai,Di.ni domgilimchi naa pErutO nEnu ichchinaTlu fraaD messEjes istunnaaru. dayachEsi ilaamTi vaariki tagina buddi cheppavalsimdigaa telugu pIpul DaaT kaam vaariki maanavi.......
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 20, Sep 2006 1:50:02 PM IST
andarikee dhanyavaadaalu. kavitani aabjekTiv gaa chUDaalani ikkaDa chaalaa mandi nOTa vinnaanu. alaanTappuDu ee kavitani migataa kavitalatO pOlchaDamenduku? sinpul gaa ee kavita baagulEdu ani cheppEstE saripOtundi kadaa. prati kavita raasETappuDu kavi/kavayitri okE sthaayilO unDaraa? anumaanaM evarainaa teerchagalaru.
Posted by: Mrs. Jyotsna Kumar Mantha At: 19, Sep 2006 7:41:08 PM IST
amdarU cheppinaTTU mI munupaTi kavitala sthAyilO lEkapOyinA.. still it's good naaku nachchimdi.
Posted by: Anitha At: 19, Sep 2006 7:29:21 PM IST
mee sthaayilO lEdu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 19, Sep 2006 11:09:56 AM IST
chaannaaLLaki raasinaTlu unnaaru !!!
endukO gaanee mee munupaTi kavitallO unnanta readability indulO kanipinchalEdu naaku :((
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 18, Sep 2006 3:32:07 PM IST
'paxilaa egirE manasu mODu mIda vaalinappuDu ' anna bhaavam baagumdi. poyeTik ekspreshan amTE adi. cheppaalamTE I kavita kannaa imtakumumdu mIru raasina kavita 'chinni puvvu' marennO meTTlu peina umdi. tEDaa gamanimchagalaru. cheppadalchukunna vishayaanni chakkagaa cheppagaligE Sakti mIku umdi E kavitalOneinaa. abhinamdanalu......
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 18, Sep 2006 2:54:52 PM IST
bAgumdi ..
chivari KamDika ' pamchimg efekT ' ivvalEka pOyimdi.. adE jIvam..imkomcham efOrT peTTAli
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 18, Sep 2006 2:46:08 PM IST
baavochchindi...kaapoatae konni ekspreshan` s alavaaTaina ekspreshan` s...inkonchem effort peTTi unTae improov` menT unDaedi. but definitely a good job
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 18, Sep 2006 11:54:43 AM IST
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