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| adhbutamgaa undi..
Posted by: Mr. srinivas mullapudi At: 21, Jan 2007 1:17:40 AM IST
Annaaavre(Kannada lo),
Naaku anthagaa Bhaasha vignaanam kaani, bhaasha paandithyam kaani levu, ayinaa, edo naaku thochindi chepthunnaanu...
Title 'Kondaranthe' ani unte baagunnanipinchindi...
Naaku idi chaala baaga nachindi...
'Aakaasam tho Dosthii unnaa,
Aalaya Sikharaaniki ahankaaram ledu,
Unte Paavuraallatho jatha katteda...'
Wonderful...Awesome..No words for that...
Inkokati 'Gundelo Koneru untundi, vaari mounam lone galagalalu'...Andaru ila unte ee Prapancham entha baaguntundi...
Anna gaaru,
Meeru ardam naaku thelipentha varaku ee Poem lo intha nighoodamaina ardam daagi undani ardam chesukolekapoyaanu...
Hats Off to U anna gaaru...
Naaku kooda thondarlo oka Poem(LOLz, Telugu lo) wraayaalani undi...
Posted by: UK At: 28, Sep 2006 8:14:30 PM IST
good job sir
kavitaloa annee khanDikallaanae frame chaeyaDam anavasaram.
udaaharaNaku koddi mandi antae anna tarvaata braek anavasaram.
somehow gannaeru poolu virisinaTTu anigaaka konchem bhinnamaina ekspreshan` vaaDi unTae inkaa andam vachchaedaemoa chooDanDi.
chivarloa aa koddi mandi ani cheppakunDaa koddi mandi antae...anaesi unDi unTae elaa unDaedi ?
ivi chinna chaerpulu maarpula gurinchi salahaalu maatramae. mottam meeda concept baavundi.
chivarloa oa praSna -
ee kavitaloa strength vachchaesi observation aa? laedaa vaakya nirmaaNamaa? laedaa kavitaa Sailinaa ?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 27, Sep 2006 11:49:17 AM IST
nijamE nihaar . ninna manaM anukunnaTTu...
aakaaSaMtO chelimi chEstunnaanani
aalayaSiKaraM
paavuraaLLanu
palakarinchaDaM maanutundA?
anTE chaalaa baavunTundi. aalaya SiKaraaniki ahankaaraM lEdanna vishayaM paaThakuDE ee padachitraM chUsi grahinchukOgalaDu. Nice observation nihaar .
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Sep 2006 11:18:11 AM IST
chAlA bAvumdamDI...
'guDi meTlalA bayaTE umDipOtAru pAdAlanu sAdaramgA aahvAnistuu...'
vAv`,eduTi manishilOni nirADambararatanU,odigiumDEtanAnni imta chakkagAkUDA cheppagalarA?!
Posted by: Anitha At: 27, Sep 2006 5:00:31 AM IST
subboo, aalayaSikharaaniki ahaMkaaraM lEdanna vishayaM kavi pratyEkiMchi cheppaalsina avasaraM lEdani naa uddESyaM. aalayaSikharaM aakaaSaMtO, paavuraaLLatO okEreetina chelimi chEstuMdanna padachitraM ee vishayaM cheppakanE chebutuMdi. kaadaMTaaraa?
Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 27, Sep 2006 3:36:04 AM IST
Chala Bagundi,
Your expressions are high with quality.
Good one
Posted by: Dr. Raghotham Reddy Pinninti At: 26, Sep 2006 11:46:42 PM IST
alaaMTi vaaLLu -
pEruprakhyaatulanu 'lekka'peTTaru.
'bhaasha'lO aaDaMbaraM vaaLLaku asalE akkarlEdu.
paduguri meppukOsaM 'Drilloo' chEyaru.
'vijNjaanaSaastrakhanulani' anipiMchukOvaalani taapatrayapaDaru.
'charitra'kOsamoo bratakaru.
'bhoogOLaM' kOsamE bratukutaaru.
meeru vraasinadi eMtagaanO nachchi, naaku kooDaa ee reMDu mukkalu vraayaalanipiMchiMdi.
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 26, Sep 2006 9:04:00 PM IST
EnTi saar ?? taaralU..!! meravanDaa???? inkaa nayaM chukkalU..!! chukkEsukOnDi..!! annaaru kaadu :))
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 26, Sep 2006 9:03:25 PM IST
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gunDelO kOnEru unTundi
vAri maunamlOnE
dAni galagalalu...
vaav !! chaalaa baavundanDI mee kavita.. intakii 'vaari' lO evarevaru unnAru? :))
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 26, Sep 2006 8:15:16 PM IST
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