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Articles: Poetry | | maniddaram | |
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| viSwAjI idi kavitvam kAdannAru.adE chEttO yendukkAdO kUDA vivaristE yubhayulakU kshEmam .mIru lEvanettina vishayAlaku nAku tOchina samAdhAnAlistAnu.dinDu pakkana sampengalu anaDamlO antarArthamEmI unDabOdu.allAgani viparItArthamUlEdu.akkaDunnadallA swachChamaina SRugAram .andulO tappupaTTE avasaram lEdu.chiru gOrumuddalu anavasaramannAru dAnni oppukOvachchu.railu paTTAllA samAntarangA ani rAyakapOyunTE (vinAyakamjI cheppinaTTu )baddIlunnAyigA kaluputU anchAta samAntarangA anAlsindani mIre anEvArEmO.konni chOTla dRusyAnni sAdRuSyangA cheppaTamlO anauchityamEmI lEdu. yendukanTE ikkaDa samAntarammandi guNa vAchakamE gAnI viSEshaNam gAdu. kavita adhika viSEshaNAlavalla debbatinTundi gAnI guNa sUchakAla valla gAdu.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Oct 2006 1:23:24 PM IST
kavita chadivina vemTanE 'naa' 'nI' lu tIsEstE kavita imkaa baagumTumdi. avi tIsEsinaa ardham cheDadu ani 'likhita' lO kaamemT Teip chEsi peTTukuni pOsT chEsE mumdu chUsaa vaastav alOk gaarU adE raasaarani :). alakalu , bujjagimpulu, allarlu, mamdalimpulu anagaanE avi iddariki sambamdhimchina vishayaalani telustUnE umTumdi. 'nI' 'naa' anavasaramgaa upayOgimchaDam valla kavita flO debba timTOmdi.
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'reilu paTTaallaa
samaamtaramgaa eppuDayyaamO
nIkeinaa gurtumdaa !?'
vaah ! . I lein#lu poyeTrI kunna Saktini Rujuvu chEstunnaayi.
mIru mamchi kavayitri. tarachU raastU umDamDi.....
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 13, Oct 2006 1:19:35 AM IST
chAla eDiTing avasaram
nIlu, nAlU tIsEyyanDi.chivari sTAnjA pUrtigA anavasaram.
railu paTTAllA
samAntarangA
epuDayyAmO
nIkainA gurtundA?
kavita ikkaDikaipOyindi.
subramaNyam gArrAsina kavitvamlO vAchAlata vokkasAri gurtuchEsukOnDi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, Oct 2006 9:28:58 PM IST
Simple ga chala bagundi
Nice one
Posted by: Dr. Raghotham Reddy Pinninti At: 12, Oct 2006 9:06:41 PM IST
nice poem nishi gaaru..
wonderful comment vinayakamjee.. some of ur comments are more poetic than most of the poems here... i liked it... :)
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 12, Oct 2006 2:45:00 PM IST
bAdha vEyadammaDU..!!prati aDuguki paTTIlanu kaluputU ' baddIlu ' umTaayi chivarAKaridAkA...
..peinumchi kanapaDavu..
bAgA rAsAv..:))
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 12, Oct 2006 2:03:59 PM IST
jeevitam ante :)
Posted by: Mrs. manjira m At: 12, Oct 2006 1:39:07 PM IST
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