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| araNya gaariki,
namastE. mIru cheppina vishayaalaki kRutajNjatalu. mIrannaTlu komdaralaa chEyaDaaniki avakaaSam umDachchu kaanI ippuDu pOsT chEstunnadi mUrti gaarE. elaa cheppagalanamTE aayana telugu pIpul DaaT kaam lO naa in# baaks ki meyil pampaaru. aayanaki idE modaTi saari oka DaaT kaam lO kavitalu pampaDam ani cheppaaramdulO . kaamemTs elaa raayaalO imkaa amta varakU nErchukOlEdaayana. taruvaata imkO vishayam punarapi jananam lO heikU latO baaTu aakharlO konni kavitalu viDigaa kUDaa unnaayi. naa daggara umdaa pustakam.
aayana pustakam ekkuva mamdi chadivi umDarEmO ani ikkaDa pOsT chEsaanani raasaaraayana meyil lO. imkO vishayam EmiTamTE si.naa.re kUDaa annI goppa kavitalE raayalEdu. asalalaa evarU raayalEru. sachin koTTE prati baal siksar avvaalani kOrukuMTaam. nijamgaa ataDu koTTE prati baal fOrO , siksarO ayitE manaki krikeT mIda aasakti umDadEmO. prati kavitaki chappaTlu raavakkarlEdu. ayitE oka kavi raasE pratI kavita unnata sthaayilO umDaalani manam aaSimchaDam sahajam.
mUrtigaari vishayaanikostE aayana raasina 'punarapi jananam ' kavitaa sampuTilO konni adbhutameina kavitalunnaayi. konni saadhaaraNa kavitalU unnaayi. EmeinappaTikI kavigaa aayanaki mamchi bhavishyattu umTumdanipimchimdi.
ika I madhya raasina kavitvam emduku pOshT chEyaDamlEdO aayanE cheppaali. tvaralO aayana kaamemTs raayaDam nErchukuni I vishayaaniki samaadhaanam cheptaarani aaSiddaam.
ikkaDa prachuritamoutunna (punarapi jananam lOnivi) tarigoppula vi el en mUrti gaarivi heikUlE annamduku kRutajNjatalu.
avi heikUlelaa avutaayanna praSnaki samaadhaanaanni konchem kaamkrIT gaa teliyachEyaalani prayatnistunnaa.
appuDE kavitalu raayaDam nErchukumTunna vaari numDi nishNaatula varakU amdari kavitalu prachurimchaDam telugu pIpul DaaT kaam goppatanam. modaTa tappaTaDugulu vEsinaa nidaanamgaa tama tappulu taamu telusukuni tamani taamu tIrchididdukuni mamchi kavitvam raastunna vaarini nEnerugudunikkaDa. asalu alaamTi avakaaSam , prOtsaaham , vaataavaraNam imtalaa kalpistunna E telugu patrikaa , marE veb seiT chUDalEdimtavaraku nEnu.
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Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 29, Oct 2006 1:49:41 AM IST
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 27, Oct 2006 1:52:29 AM IST
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haaY krushNagaaru ,
tarigoppala vi.el.en.moorti gaarivi 'haikulE '
idi punarapi jananam ' anE haikuu - kavitala sampuTilOnivi.
mukhyamgaa meeru gamaninchaalsina vishayam okaTi undi.
idi pOsT chEstunna raiTar moorti vorjinal kavi gaaru kaadu ani kachchitamgaa cheppagalanu.
enduvalla anTE kavi anEvaaDu ilaanTi kaamenT~s ni paTTinchukOkunDaa pOsT cheyyalEDu. paigaa
konni Taimpaas lO marikonni huumer lO pOsT chEsukunnaaru.konnaitE chettavi endulOvO kaapee.(edakadilikalu ani )
modaTa ' hai' kluulu ' ani porapaaTugaa ichchi taruvaata hai 'kluu' lu ani maarustuu veLLaDam valla ee pOsTEvaaLLaki sarainaa avagaahanalEdu ani ardham avutundi. paigaa kavi gaari pErutO atanikEdO mElu chEstunnaTTu , eppuDO 2001 lO prinTayinavE maLLee enduku pOsTutaaru ? kavi hRudayam unTE kottavE vraastaaru kadaa ?
kontamandi pichchivaaLLu bajaarulO pustakaalu koni kavi gaari pEru peTTukoni ilaanTivi chEstunTaaru adO sardaa !
meeru itanni orginal tarigoppala lakshmi naaraayaNa moorti anukunEru.atanE ayitE mee anumaanaalanni teerchEvaarE.mownayOgilaa E kavii unDalEDu , adee paata kavitalu pOsT chEstuu kimmana kunDaa elaa unTaaDanDii ? :))
porapaaTuna mee andarikee javaabu chepputE tanu nakilii manishi ani dorikipODuu ?? :)))
Posted by: Aranya At: 28, Oct 2006 3:48:12 PM IST
kiraN kumaar gaariki
namastE. mIru messEjiki kRutajNjatalu. kavitalaki mI kaamemTs chadivi chaalaa kaalam ayyimdi. naaku I rOju aafIs lO Upiri salapanamta
pani umdi. mUDu lein#lu unna pratI kavitaa heikUani tIrmaanimchalEdu nEnu. vIlayitE vividha dESaallO ippuDu vastunna heikUlani chadavamDi. Edi heikU anna vishayampei telugulO amta visRutameina charcha jaragalEdu kaanI vidESaallO, vividha bhaashallO I vishayampei vistaarameina charcha jarigimdi. ippaTikidE raayagaligina samayam umdi. rEpu vivaramgaa samaadhaanam raastaanu.
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Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 27, Oct 2006 5:05:40 PM IST
krishNa gaarU meeru naatO Ekeebhavinchaalsina avasaraM lEdu. alaagE mUrti gaari haikU avagaahanani praSninchE sthaayi kUDaa naaku lEdu. aayana haikUla pustakaM kUDaa nEnu chUDalEdu. anduvalla naa kaamenT kEvalaM prastutaM pOsT chEsina mUDu minee kavitala gurinchE. haikUki chaalaa niyamaalochchaayi. chaalaa niyamaalu pOyaayi. aitE anniTikee ateetaMgaa haikU tatvaM EdaitE undO adi ee mUDu kavitallO naaku kanipinchalEdu.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Oct 2006 12:04:33 PM IST
heiklUlu anna maaTa kavigaaru jaagrattagaa peTTukunna pErU kaadu. alaagE heiklU sUpar glU laa atikimchEdI kaadu. :)
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Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 27, Oct 2006 2:00:21 AM IST
imtaku munupu aDigaa mUrtigaarini naa kaamemTlO heiklU ani pEru emduku peTTaarani. bahuSaa chUsi umDalEdEmO
lEdaa komdarilaa kaamemTlani paTTimchukuni samaadhaanamichchE alavaaTu lEkanO.
EmeinappaTikI visRutameina chaduvaritanam umDabaTTi tvaralOnE telusukunnaa. 'punarapi jananam ' pEruna tarigoppula viellen mUrti gaaru raasina heikUlu kavitala sampuTiki mumdu maaTa raastU SrI bi.ke.Samkar gaaru mUrtigaarilO niSita pariSIlana Sakti umdanaDaaniki 'heiklU' I heikU ani oka udaaharaNa ichchaaru.
( heiklUla pEriTa mUrti gaaru raastunnavi tana I kavitaa sampuTilOnivE)
tEnelO chImalu
prajaasvaamyaanni
asvaadimchaalanukunna janam !
alaagE
' kaalam gaalaaniki chikki
vila vilalaaDE jalapushpam
manishi ! '
ani raasimdi kUDaa vaariki nachchimdi.
subrahmaNyam gaarU ,
heikUla gurumchi mUrtigaariki chakkaTi avagaahana umdanaDaaniki nidarSanam aayana
tanakavitaa sampuTilO anna maaTalivigO.
' japaan lO jen bouddhula siddhaamtam prakaaram imdriyaala dvaaraa cheitanyam pomdaalamTE
padihEDu xaNaala kaalam paDutumdi. amdukE vaaru heikU ki padihEDu Onji lani Erparichaaru..
imglIshulO padihEDu Onji laku samaanaarthakamgaa padihEDu silabuls lO heikUlu raasaaru.
telugu lO kUDaa I Onji lanu maatralugaa svIkarimchi padihEDu maatralani 5,7,5 gaa tIsukuni
mUDu paadaalalO raastunnaaru ati koddi mamdi kavulu. ayitE chaalaamamdi I niyamaanni paaTimchaDamlEdu.
nEnU chaalaa mamdilaagE praakrRutika prEraNa, padachitram anubhUti, vimarSanaatmaka dRushTi taditara amSaalani
sparSimchE vidhamgaa heikUlani raayaalani bhaavimchaanu. I heikUlu vraasETappuDu mUDu paadaalu umDaalanna
vidhaanam paaTimchaanE tappa , padihEDu axaraalu umDaalani gaanI, ChamdObadda rItulni gaanI paaTimchalEdu'
ika mIru ichchina I maaTa limk lO ismaayil gaaru heikU tatvam gurumchi chebutU vaaDina 'prakRuti' anna maaTa aadhaaramgaa
bhoutikamgaa manaki kanipimchE cheTTU, mEgham , aakaaSam , cheruvU, varsham , kiTikI lO pillaaDiki kanipimchE prakRuti laamTivi lEdaa alaamTi prakRutini sphurimpachEsElaa umTEnE adi heikU ani bhaavistunnaaru. mIru poyeTrI sexan#lO raasina 'konni heikUlu' lO I uddESyam marimta prasphuTamgaa telustOmdi. bahuSaa ismaayil gaaru ichchina
udaaharaNallO yaadhRuchchikamgaa ivE umDaTamtO mIku aa bhaavam balapaDinaTlumdi
kaanI mI abhipraayamtO EkIbhavimchaDamlEdu nEnu. adE vyaasamlO ismaayil gaaru 'anubhavimchE vastuvu anubhavimpabaDE vastuvU , vEru kaadu. remDU kalasi okaTE anubhavam ' alaagE adE vaakyamlO 'prati vastuvuki saarabhUtameina asthitvam umTumdi. mana asthitvaanni daanilO layam chEsinappuDE daanni telsukOgalam ' ilaa saagE maaTalU, adE vidhamgaa 'mUrtamU imdriyagrahyamU ayina pada chitraalani ' vETinannaarO tarkimchukumTU okasaari maLLI chadavamDi.
ika heikU pitaamahuDu maTsuvO bashO tO baTu 1600-1868 la madhya I vidhaanamlO pErennikaganna yOsaa busaan , kobayaashI issaa lu raasina 'hokkU ' lE 19 va Sataabdapu aakhari samvatsaraalanumDi 'heikU'lani piluchukumTunnaam manam. ('hokkU - heikU - hakaay ' la madhya unna kanfyUjan gurumchi marO samdarbhamlO prastaavistaanu. ) . alaagE 'klaasikal heikU ' mariyu 'mODaran heikU' lanE vibhajana umdi. (mana saahityam laagaanE) . 'shikhI ' ki mumdu tarvaatalanE marO klaasifikEshan umdi.
While traditional hokku focused on nature and the place of humans in nature, modern haiku poets often consider any subject matter suitable, whether related to nature, an urban setting, or even a technological context. .
ika maLLI mIru udaharimchina ismaayil gaari vyaasamlOki vastE amdulO aayana japaan heikU laxaNameina 16 varNaala niyamam telugulO paaTimchaDam emduku vIlu kaadO vivarimchaaru. japanIya bhaashani anukarimchaDam telivi takkuva annaaru. mari aa niyamam paaTimchani telugulOni heikU asalu heikU kaadanagalamaa?. ikkaDa pratyEkimchi varNaala niyamam gurumchi anaTamlEdu. niyamaalagurumchi udaharimchaanaa maaTani.
ippuDu heikU viSvavyaapitameimdi. daani puTTukatO vachchina niyaamaalu annI alaagE lEvu. heikU yokka mUlam tO baaTu kaalakramamlO heikU samtarimchukunna amSaalani kUDaa parigaNana lOki tIsukOvaali. padyaalani maatramE kavitvamanalEm kadaa.
Modern Haiku
The history of the modern haiku dates from Masaoka Shiki's reform, begun in 1892, which established haiku as a new independent poetic form. Shiki's reform did not change two traditional elements of haiku: the division of 17 syllables into three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables and the inclusion of a seasonal theme.
Kawahigashi Hekigoto carried Shiki's reform further with two proposals:
1. Haiku would be truer to reality if there were no center of interest in it.
2. The importance of the poet's first impression, just as it was, of subjects taken from daily life, and of local colour to create freshness.
mUrtigaaru mIku telisina konni heikU niyamaalu paaTimchanamtamaatraanna avi heikUlu kaavani elaa anagalaru?
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 27, Oct 2006 1:52:29 AM IST
satyaraama prasaad gaarU, ee kavitalu baavulEvanigaanee , veeTilO kavitvaM lEdanigaanee nEnekkaDaa analEdu. kavi gaaru jaagratta paDi hai'klU'lu ani TaiTil peTTinaa ,'haikUlu' baavunnaayi ani vachchina kaamenT chUsi alaa spandinchaalsi vachchindi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 26, Oct 2006 11:05:42 PM IST
pEru Edeinaa ee 'heikloolu' manOraMjakaMgaa unnaayi. mukhyaMgaa 'samOsaa' ayitE mareenu.
pOnee veeTini kaaryakaaraNasaMbaMdhaM kaligina 'heikoo'lu aMdaaM. rachayita 'pErupeTTaDaM'lO muMdE jaagrattapaDDaaru kadaa!
'simeMTu'yokka oka mukhya lakshaNaM EmiTaMTE neeru tagilina veMTanE bigusukupOvaTaM. kaanee ONGC
vaMTi kaMpeneelaku simeMTu lakshaNaalu annee uMDi, veMTanE bigusukOni baapatu 'simemTu' kaavalasi vachchiMdaTa. pariSOdhana chEsi vaaLLakOsaM
slow setting cement okadaanini roopoMdiMchukunnaaru. alaagE ee 'heikloo' anukuMTE pOlEdaa?
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 26, Oct 2006 10:51:08 PM IST
tappakumDaa chaduvutaanu aa vyaasam.. kRutajNjatalu subrahmaNyam gaarU.
heikUlani pOlina kavitalaki heikUla taatvikatani nimpukunna kavitalaki
tEDaa umdani mIru cheppadalchukunnaarallE umdi. ......
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 26, Oct 2006 3:43:44 PM IST
krishNa gaarU ivi haikUlu kaavu. chamatkaaraM , minee kavitalu haikUlu kaalEvu. haikU gurinchi telusukODaaniki kindi vyaasaM chadavanDi.
http://eemaata.com/em/library/karunamukhyam/930.html
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 26, Oct 2006 2:40:21 PM IST
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