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Articles: Poetry | | O jaabilamma.. | |
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| naaku matram chala touching gaa vundi idi
Posted by: sunny At: 21, Jul 2003 8:39:52 AM IST
koddiga ..can u make it clear...itlu akasham ani enduku pettaro
Posted by: sunny At: 20, Jul 2003 8:06:04 PM IST
3rd stanza chala bagundhi...way of expressing is really beautiful....
konchem confusing ga anipinchindhi first time..but 2 times chadivaka nijangaa bagundhi...ayyababoii meeku ilanty thoughts elaa vatshunnayandi ....really wonderful thought..
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 20, Jul 2003 4:08:56 PM IST
Once again nice words from u, but akaasham pade badhani, aa badhaki iche reasons ni inka varniste adbhutanga undedi ...
vekuava rekhalu ???
vekuva rekhalu suryudu kada techedi ?
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 20, Jul 2003 11:01:01 AM IST
good one...but...itlu nee akasham ante enti
Posted by: sunny At: 20, Jul 2003 9:55:17 AM IST
good...
mee inko kavitha kosam eduru choostunna...
Posted by: Mr. benerjee At: 19, Jul 2003 4:32:23 PM IST
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