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| what u wrote abt not having a girl child is not right (one reader)
Posted by: Miss sridevi veeraghanta At: 1, Dec 2006 0:51:01 AM IST
Posted by: Mrs. malathi kona At: 29, Nov 2006 0:15:31 AM IST
mAlati gArU,
krinda unna mI kAmenTu ippuDE chUsAnu. nijaMgA nEnu porapATu chEsAnu. idEdO mokkubaDigA nEnu mimmalni, mIru nannu kshamApaNalu aDagaTaM kAdu. manaspUrtigA cheptunnAnu. mI krindi kAmenTu chUDagAnE 'asalu modaTa nEnenduku kAmenTU vrAsAnA' anipinchindi. porapATunainA inkokaLLani bAdhapeTTaTaM mahApApaM ani nammutAnu. idEdO mUDhaviSwAsaM kAdu. oka naitika dharmaM. I viShayaM ikkaDitO vadilEddAM. mIrannaTTu, oka kuTumbaMlA undAM.
Posted by: Mr. Rajeswar J At: 29, Nov 2006 3:01:31 PM IST
nEnu vimarSalu chEyanu. mAlatigAru nAku ichchina vivaraNa kavitalO in`klUD chEstE bAguMDEdi. kavitaki E vastuvu anarhaM kAdu. anuBavAlu, anuBUtula niMchi kavitvaM puDutuMdi. aMdulO tappu lEdu. mAlatigAri vivaraNa nAku chAlA nachchiMdi kUDA. Edi EmainA, ika nuMchi nEnu kUDA jAgartagA vyavaharistAnu. nA lOpAnni teliyajeppina vAriki nA kRutajNatalu.
Posted by: Mr. Ranga Rao P. At: 29, Nov 2006 2:17:46 AM IST
malathi garu..mi kavita loni sunnitamaina mi bhavalanu chusanu..chala bagundi..
mi kavita pai vimarhanu kuda chusanu..
adi vaari abhiprayame anipinchindi kani vimarshaga anipinchaledu..
vimarsha badha pettediga kaadu betterment ki vupayoga paDela vundalanedi na abhiprayam..
vimarsha kuda oka maatala gaaraDiyega.. yedo teliyani adhipatyapu korike andulo kanipistundi..
yemantaru..
Posted by: Mr. rasheed basha shaik At: 28, Nov 2006 8:55:58 PM IST
mAlati gArU,
nA vyAkhyalu mIku manastApaM kaligistE kshaminchanDi. Ti.pi.kAM lO andaraM oka kuTumbaMlA unDAlani nA kOrika. A uddESyaM tOTE 'andarU manavALLEgA' anE chanuvumIda, Girl-Child mIda mamakAraMtO, nA aBiprAyaM konchem nirmohamATaMgA cheppAnEmO. mIku bAdha kaligistE kshaminchanDi. mAmIda kOpaMtO mIru kavitalu vrAyaTaM mAnavaddu.
ObulareDDi gAriki kUDA nA kshamApaNalu teliyachEyagalaru.
Posted by: Mr. Rajeswar J At: 28, Nov 2006 7:43:18 PM IST
malathu garu,
Baaga raasaru meeru, keep it up.
Evaro anarani meeru emotional kaakandi. meeku mundu chepinatuga.. ikadanta trivial things gurinchi aalochinche vaale ekkuva. Okka manchi kavita ni protsahinchedi poyi ila tikkaga rayadam paripaati ayindi. Anduke antanu sister nenu, tikalolu raasedi do'nt take it to heart.
sada
Posted by: Mr. suman kumar yadamani At: 28, Nov 2006 2:04:35 PM IST
kaMpukoTTE vimarSakulu pOyAru, saiTu bAgupaDtuMdanukuMTE raMgArAvu, rAjESvararAvu tayArayyArA?
EmayyA raMgA rAvu nee pAta kavitalu chadivAnu. O kavitalO vimarSakulani 'shaMDu'lani tiTTina nee pAMDityAniki adi tappani anipiMchalEdA?
EmayyA rAjESvarrAvu ee kavita meeda nuvvu cheppiMdi nee vyaktigata bhAvaM kAdA. adi nee DairilOnE rAsuku kUrchuMTE pOyEdigA. sAmAjikaspRuhatO rAsiMdE kavitvamaMTE manaku vEmana padyAlu, sumatee SatakAlu tappiMchi vErE kavitvaM migaladu.
Keep writing Malati.
Posted by: Mr. Obulreddy P At: 28, Nov 2006 11:06:05 AM IST
i too aree with RAJESWAR gaaru
Posted by: Mrs. manvita manvita At: 28, Nov 2006 6:27:35 AM IST
mAlati gArU,
vyaktigata prAdhAnyAlU, BAvAlU 'DairI'llO vrAsukunTAru; kavitallO kAdu. kavitaki sAmAjika spRuha, bAdhyata entO avasaraM. rangArAvu gAru A uddESyaMtOTE, Girl-Child ki vyatirEkaMgA undi annAru. mIdAkA enduku, ImadhyanE amitAb bachchan pApaM 'manavaDu' kAvAlanukunnAnduku Eki pArESAru.
koDukuni, lEdA koDukunE kOrukonE mI vyaktigata aBIShTAlatO mAkEmI sambandhaM lEdu. kAnI, kavitalaki sAmAjika spRuha anEdi kanIsAvasaraM. kAdU ani vAdistE oka namaskAraM.
Posted by: Mr. Rajeswar J At: 28, Nov 2006 2:06:57 AM IST
ADapilla puTTakUDadanna kAM`sepT bAdhAkaraM
Posted by: Mr. Ranga Rao P. At: 27, Nov 2006 3:52:10 PM IST
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