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Posted by: Mr. antha nijam At: 28, Jul 2003 7:15:40 PM IST
hi..anaditha rao..ur rite ..ive been deserted from my best friends. well when i wuz livin in nigeria i had 2 leave da country after i lived there for almost 10 yrs..i had ma best friends n stuff soo...i really couldnt bear da seperation so i rote a few poems on that.
avan
Posted by: Ms. avanti At: 28, Jul 2003 5:56:07 PM IST
Uh!!(*sighs)What a wonderful way of putting down the thoughts that have come along. neways...a question for you Ms.Avanti. Have you have been deserted by a friend.(Excuse me if I am invading your personal space). Nonetheless...very very organised presentation...Heart touching..:)
Posted by: Mrs. Nandita Rao At: 28, Jul 2003 4:57:36 PM IST
good. but, i would lke suggest u something.
in poetry, dont use abbrevations and lot of punctuations like 'll for will, cuz for because, 'd for would etc. they lessen
the feeling in a poem.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 28, Jul 2003 3:03:47 PM IST
Hai.
poetically this is good&Excellent. Nothing comments for ur article. keep it up.
Ram.tammineni
Posted by: Mr. RamchanderRao Tammineni At: 28, Jul 2003 2:05:13 PM IST
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