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| first chadvutune krishna paksham chadivattu ani anipinchindi.
padlanni chakka ga pondika ga kurchunnayi.... :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 8, Aug 2003 1:57:38 PM IST
Good..You got a good command on the literture which is clearly known in this lyric. Yet, compose in easily accessble language even to a common man to understand your bhavam, varnana is very fine. Plese don't misunderstand me, I am not commenting but just giving a suggestion.
-sastri, 00-43 A.M. 5th Aug.03 Canada
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 5, Aug 2003 8:24:35 AM IST
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