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Articles: Poetry | | O...manasaa | |
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| Hi Ram,
Its awesome.Chaaaaalaaaaaaaaaaaa nachindi naaaku.Did u write it.U have wonderful choice.Post more good ones.
sushmi
Posted by: Miss Susmitha Tarlapally At: 18, Sep 2003 10:53:08 PM IST
beautifulllllllll
Posted by: Ms. Appanapalli Srilata At: 12, Aug 2003 11:02:15 PM IST
Mr. Grandhi garu,
Naaku mee first Kavita nijam gaa nachindi andi, naa age around 45 years, ayina mee kavitaki, koncham manasu kadilindi aney cheyppali. Chala manchi bhavam meeku vachindi, kaka pootey inka bhaga rayochu ani naa feeling. Meeru first kavitaney intha baga rasaru. Mee manasuku spurthi nichina mee maro manasuki meeku ee Kaivta loookam looki swagatam palukutu
Neeraj
Posted by: Dr. MallemPalli Neeraj At: 12, Aug 2003 6:13:15 PM IST
wow ,
wow
I just registered today in telugupoeple.com I am going through all the poetry articles, I left all one one line comments on other ones like...ISTAM, MARO ROJUKI SWAGATAM,ETC ETC..but I liked this, Ramakrishna garu, chala manchi thought, naaku kudaa ilaney anipistundi, but express cheyyaleynu, naa manasu gurinchi. chala bavundi andi :)
ila rastuu vundandi meru inka inka..inthaki yenti vishayam umm ummm ummmmmmmmm
Posted by: Ms. T Sneha mala At: 12, Aug 2003 5:45:59 PM IST
Hey Ramakrishna, Nice one dude.
Yenti, yevaroo ah mansu, cheyppuley mama neenu vintaa.
First kavita annav pedda Turum Khan laa rasav ley :)
simple ga bavundi, kavita la kakunda mamulu words lo. good. nenu kuda oka manasuni vetukovali inka. :P yekkadanna oka extra manasu vuntey let me know mama
buzz me at: if you get a chance, I will give you a message to tp.com check it.
Posted by: Mr. HOoo HOoo HOoo Hee Heee Hee At: 12, Aug 2003 5:32:39 PM IST
Ramkrishna gariki!
Namaste!!
First kavita tho ma nota maata rakunda chesaru.Chala bavundi "Mi Manasu". Mi mansu ki intha todu nichhina a 'Inko mansu' entha bavuntundo mari. Ur lucky to have.
Manasu ni baadha pettedi maname, santhosha pettedi maname nandi. Only thing that differs is, in individuals perspective.
Ending chala bavundi andi. Neevu leni chota a prema ledu..... a sentence.Prema lenide nijam ga e jagattu ledu, alage iddaru premikalu kalavaleni chota a prema vunike ledu emo kada andi.
Mi inko aani mutyam kosam eduru chustu vuntam ...chakora pakshulu laaga :).
Good Luck.!
Nandita
Posted by: Mrs. Nandita Rao At: 12, Aug 2003 5:11:46 PM IST
Ram,
Tolisaarigaa 'Nee manasune' tolikavitha gaa chesi ee kavithaavanamloki adugupettina neeku swagatham.....
nee kalam nundi ilaa marenneo kavitha pushpaalu virboosi aa sumaparimalaalato maa manasulani ranjimpacheyalni manaspoorthigaa korukuntunnanu....
"picchi manasu kadha dhanikem telusu, entha parigeeethina ee sunyamaina viswaaniki anthe ledhani".........wonderfulgaa cheppavu
saaswatham kaani sareeram bharinchalekunnadi....wow manchi meaning ful scentence.....
.....conclusion chala bagundhi Ram...Background chala bagundhi..chala antey chala....
So finally u r here...nice to see u ...Goodluck to u and to ur heart(hope u understand 'ur heart' means)....
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 12, Aug 2003 4:16:28 PM IST
hai ramakirshna,
beautifulga vundi.chala bagaa raasav.nee manasu dhochukunna aa yinko manasu yevaridho kani yintha premanu(badhanu)panche manasu dhorakatam nijamga she is very lucky....
bachground nee kavitaki yinka andam techindi...keep it up...aame sporthitho nuvvinka yilanti kavithalu yenno rayaalani maa aakanksha.....keep it up chanti...
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 12, Aug 2003 3:40:57 PM IST
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