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| Ragottham Garu/Sridhar gaaru,
Thanks for your comments and suggestions.
kaani kavithvam anedhi padhaala prayogam kaadhu,Kavitha ku bhaavam,dhaani loni antharaardham mukyam ani naa abhipraayam.
sridhar gaaru,akkadinundi oka line,ikkadinundi oka line ani annaaru,kaani meeru kavithalu raasthe oka saari mee kavithalani jaagrattha gaa parisheelinchandi,meeru vupayooginchina padhaalu eppudo ekkado evvaro vupayoginchi vuntaaru,antha maathraana adhi copy kottatam kaadhu...Evvaru vupayooginchani padhaalante meeru sontha gaa oka baasha kanipettandi.Kavitha ku padhaala prayoogam mukyamanukunte,intha girijana saahityam,inni palle paatalu vacchheeve kaavu,but Ragottham gaaru,I'll try to improve and i need the suggestions from the people like you.
Posted by: Mr. prasad sala At: 27, Aug 2003 4:55:42 PM IST
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