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Posted by: Saleem At: 29, Aug 2003 12:52:21 PM IST
bagundi..keep it up :-)
Posted by: Mr. M.S.Reddy At: 29, Aug 2003 5:37:18 AM IST
tulasi,chala baagundi nee 'dari chera raava priyaa'!!thappanisariga nee priyudu nee daricheraalani naa koorika...just kidding raa,but ur poem is simply superb.....
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 29, Aug 2003 4:55:54 AM IST
sreedhar gaaru,
Evaraina love lo first okasari chusthe chaalu annattu parithapinchipothaaru...inkaa depth velthunna koddhi, nityam, anukhanam vallathone vundaalanukuntaru....
naa meaning almost anthe.....
thanks for ur nice comments and valuable suggestions...
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 29, Aug 2003 1:52:45 AM IST
baagundi .. kaani mee last couple of kavitalanta goppaga ledu..
and also..
yedalo savvadiga maarina ninnu naa kanuchoopu sokinappudu.. enduko anta odiginattu kanipinchatem ledu..
alaaage
kshanakaalam nee daaniga chesukovaa ani mundannaru..
malli chivariki
bratuku chivari malupu tirige varaku todundava annaru..
ee vaakyam mundu cheppi.. chivaragaa.. kshanakaalamaina nee daaniga chesuko ante baagunedi..
just my two cents..
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 29, Aug 2003 1:05:38 AM IST
Beautiful Tulasi! Your style of expression(saili) and content of expression are really superb.
"naalugu/ayidu telugu aksharaalani arachEtilOki
teesukoni pinditE, tEne kaarutundani", Nee anni kavitallo enchakka cheppavo:)
E line - "Mounam ga mamatala maalalu alluthu Abhisarikanavutanu" chala bavundi..The way you use all the words in such a subtle but yet in delicate intricacies is reallly adorble. :)
Nandita
Posted by: Mrs. Nandita Rao At: 28, Aug 2003 9:58:08 PM IST
chala bagundi tulasi garu.
Mee bhava pada vallari .... allika chala bagundi ....
Posted by: Mr. Shashi Priyatam At: 28, Aug 2003 9:44:20 PM IST
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