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| chaalaa..........baagundanDi..amRutakalaSaM, nijangaa saagaramadhanaM nunDochchina..amRutakalaSaM laagae undi.
Posted by: Mr. కమల్ At: 23, Jul 2007 10:54:58 PM IST
chaala baagundanDi...muginpu baavundi
inkaa mee nunchi ilaanTivi raavaalani eduru choosElaa raasaaru
Posted by: Mr. Rufus Kumar kamidi At: 11, Jul 2007 12:02:57 PM IST
chAlA rOjula tarvAta manchi kadha chadivaanu.. kadhanam chAlA bAvundi.. mee ninchi ilAnTi marennO manchi kadhalu kOsam eduru chUstunTAmu.. :-)
chinna sajeshan& .. pErAgrAph lu maree peddavigaa kAkunDA chinnavigA viDagoDitE flO inkA bAvunTundi :-)
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 24, Jun 2007 4:24:57 AM IST
I hope you will accept crticism also...
six class ammayi dairy vrayadam emiti andi ....edo me katha kosam edo ala character nu ala nadipinchaaru!
Me main character 16/08/94 lo six class chaduvutho undedhi! Ante april or may 1995 lo six complete ayyinatlu. Ante 94-95 -) six class
95-96 -) 7th class
96-97 -) 8th class
97-98 -) 9th class
98-99 -) 10 class.
Kaani me katha prakaram 05/04/97 lo main character 10 th class chaduvuthu undi!
How is it possible? (Edhi yela sadyam!)
Lekunte 2 classes 'jump' chesindhi anu kovalaa!
Kaneesam meeru aa vishayam (jump) ekkada cheppaledhu!
edi ayithe emi ... mee katha chivaralo rendu gundelaku hatthu kuni sangatanalu (?) vrasi edo ayi poyindi anipincharu!
My intention is not to hurt you (or) any other person. It´s my opinion!
Thanks!
Posted by: Mr. Prasantha Praz At: 23, Jun 2007 6:05:55 AM IST
kadha, kadhanaM chaalaa baagaa unnayi. 'chaduvukunna' (Emi chaduvO)ippaTi janaM 'iMDiviDyuvaaliTI' tokka aMTaaru kaani..iMDiviDyuvaaliTI marI ekkuva ayitE migilEdi 'oMTaritanamE!'
Posted by: Bullibasu Bullibasu At: 22, Jun 2007 5:56:11 AM IST
Nice story. concentration toni chaduvutunte anipinchindi. 97 lo 10th farewell party and 2001 lo Love in College.. Degree 2nd year lo love?? ani doubt vachhindi ante... :)
ofcourse chinna vayasulo pelli kuda aipoi vundachhu anukondi..
good one.. really good one
~ AS
Posted by: Ayyavaru Sivalenka At: 20, Jun 2007 0:03:21 AM IST
Srujana Garu
Really excellent one andi...after a long time i had read such a good story...after reading this i can't stop myself to comment on this.
Keep posting such good stories.
it's very interesting to see the existing comments are only from women’s.
Posted by: Mr. Koti Koti At: 19, Jun 2007 7:27:19 PM IST
Srujana garu,
excellent andii, kallaku kattinatlu vundhi, infact its happening with many couples. busy life lo chala mandhi miss qyyi feel avuthunna feelings ni, meeru chaala baaga express chesaru...mee suggestion bagundhi. thanx for your good story! keep posting.
Posted by: Mrs. keerthi keerthi At: 19, Jun 2007 5:47:26 PM IST
simply super
i jus love it
i dont know how many times i have read ur story
Posted by: Miss Lalitha Sravanthi Pochiraju At: 19, Jun 2007 5:43:11 PM IST
Chala chala baagundi. :)
Posted by: Miss Jyothirmai Gosukonda At: 19, Jun 2007 12:50:15 PM IST
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