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Articles: Short Stories | | andaala raakshasi | |
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| Hi Rufus,
Awesome undi story. giligintalu pettindi romantic situations lo, neeku ee talent undanee eppudoo cheppane ledu maaku. :) once again awesome undi.... malle poola suvaasanalu....fresh feeling...baagundi baagundi.
@ Mrs Usha Udapa
sandeshaalu kaavaalammaa neeku??? neetulu cheptaa vnamante enta mandi vintaaramma, poni vinesi paatistaaraa ante adee ledu. indulo sandesham ledani endukanipinchindi...padma tana bava manasulo tanu lenu ani telisaaka...suicide laantii chesukokundaa healthy friendship maintain chesindi..meerayite inko type lo sandesham ichchevaaramo...meeru emanna rachanalu chesaaraa madam, unte chusi taristaam mee prayogaalaau...
Posted by: Mr. Jagadi S At: 28, Jan 2008 9:40:25 PM IST
ee katha chadavaagaanae naaku mana paata sinimaaheeroa Soabhan baabu sinimaalu gurtukochchaayi. oka heeroa ,iddaru haeroyin&lu, kathaloa pedda saaraM Edilaekunnaa..! manchi romaanTik gaa undi, baava maradala madya jarigae roamaanTik sannivaeSaalu chaalaa baagunnaayi..prastuta gloabalaijaeshan kaalaM loa ivvannee ippuDu uuhinchalaemu..antaa parugulamayaM jeevitaM. ayitae ikkaDa naakoa sandaehaM.idaevidangaa oka ammaayiki jarigitae..ee kathaloalaagae samaajaM oppukunTundaa..oka heeroayin..iddaru heeroalu. kaevalaM idi magavaarivishayaM loa ayitaenae aadaristaaru, adae aaDavaariki ilaagae iddaribaavala praema kathavraaste entamandi aadaristaaru..?
Posted by: Mr. కమల్ At: 23, Jul 2007 10:01:36 PM IST
idekkadi cheththa katha raa baaboooyi, payigaa deeniki A certificate ivvalanna recommendation kuudaanaa ?? Emitoo jihwakoo ruchi purre koo budhdhi ani indukee antaareemoo :-) Oo sandeesham leedu, pooni katheemannaa vundaa antee adii leedu.Author gaaru cheesina modati rachana prayogamaa??
Posted by: Mrs. usha udupa At: 16, Jul 2007 6:04:23 AM IST
Its OK Kavya i accept ur apologies.
If u wouldn't have pointed out my comments or target my name in your comments, i would have least bothered.
If some one likes the story they should appreciate it as simple as that, why should they bother to comment on some other prespective.
Iam practising wht i said till today , i never made a comment on ur prespective or opinion.
Posted by: Sanvi Sarma At: 13, Jul 2007 12:23:14 PM IST
@TP admin
can i recall my comment?
this is something nobody appreciates
@vaishnavi
sorry if i hurt you
dint expect this from you...but kindly check this line ' Inkokari taste gurinchi,abhiprayalu gurinchi mee comments mee prespective public sites lo vyaktham cheyaatam mee vignatha samsakaaranni batti vutundhi.'
it cud be good if you practiced it instead of writing here
Posted by: Miss Kavya Aalapaati At: 13, Jul 2007 12:06:04 PM IST
@Kavya
Miss Kavya story nachakapothee nachaledhu ani cheppe vaak swathanthra hakku prathi okkariki vundhi, andariki anni nachalani ledhu.
When some one is publishing stories in public forums they should be prepared to even face critisicm.
Inkokari taste gurinchi,abhiprayalu gurinchi mee comments mee prespective public sites lo vyaktham cheyaatam mee vignatha samsakaaranni batti vutundhi.
Posted by: Sanvi Sarma At: 13, Jul 2007 11:10:51 AM IST
The romance between the couples is not adviced to be read by teenagers or kids, i have till now seen very decent and hilarious short stories in tp.com.
Posted by: Sanvi Sarma At: 13, Jul 2007 10:38:25 AM IST
story chaalaa baavundanDi
chinna incident ni chakkagaa nErpugaa raasaaru
Vaishnavi gaaru annaTTu swaati weekly ki pampiste inkaa ekkuvamandi chadavagalugutaaru
Vaishnavi meeru konchem ekkuva react ayinaTTunnaaru.. sorry endukO naakalaa anipinchindi
expecting more from writer
Satisfied Reader,
Kavya.
Posted by: Miss kavya alapati At: 13, Jul 2007 8:35:19 AM IST
How did TP Administrator publish such a story in family site like TP?
This should be in A Section stories of Swathi weekly magazine, though the story is well told , there is no point in the story.
Wht message writer wants to convery, this story is neither thought provoking not message oreinted, not humurous,not emotional.
Its total time waste.
Disappointed Reader,
Vaishnavi
Posted by: Sanvi Sarma At: 12, Jul 2007 2:45:50 PM IST
deepaavaLi ( akTObar / navambar ) seejan lO mallepoola vaasanaa? appuDochchEvannee bantee, chEmantulE kadaa !!
vadalakunDaa chadivinchE guNam unna katha. ee madhya vachchina okaTrenDu sinimaala in spirEshan tO vraasinaTlanipinchindi.
Posted by: Mrs. Neelima At: 11, Jul 2007 8:39:03 AM IST
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