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| what u have written is correct, but does not seem to fit in the context, or I could have misinterpreted ur comments.
Please don't imagine a person who failed in a one side love (if at all u have thought so), but imagine a guy who has a passionate relation with his wife/lover, and his wife/lover is passed away(died)/seperated. I guess this poem suits such a context more ! Don't u think so ?
Posted by: Mr. Ravi S Mantha At: 4, Sep 2002 5:36:42 PM IST
Gayam chaalaa aardramgaa undandi. good expression of dense feelings.
Preyasi chese gaayaanike kaadaandi, priyulu chese gaayamainaa sare baadhistundi.
I want to say onething here. evaru evarini balavantamgaa ye pani cheyinchaleru. prema anedi sahajam gaa kalagaali. manam preminchaamani eduti vaallu manalni preminchaalani ledandi.
Sahajam gaa kaligina preme saaswatham gaa nilustundi.
Prasanthi
gudiyaji@myguruonline.net
prapeace@yahoo.com
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 4, Sep 2002 2:37:48 PM IST
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