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Articles: Poetry | | Naa Chirunama Nuvve Suma....!!! | |
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| Thanks to all....
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 9, Oct 2003 7:30:20 PM IST
Bagunnadandi Kalyani garu....last lines have a good meaning and is a good ending.But they seem to be discontinous from the earlier sentences.
On the whole 'kavitha' simply superb andi.
Good Luck
Posted by: nenu nenu nenu nene At: 8, Oct 2003 5:05:52 PM IST
Very Nice.
Really good.
I admire your dreem boy who inspired this beautiful poetry from you.
Narasim
Posted by: Mr. Narasim Kasaru At: 8, Oct 2003 1:53:48 AM IST
one more nice one from ur pen kalyani...conclusion is very nice...
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 7, Oct 2003 6:11:08 PM IST
Bavundi Kalyani garu! :)
Posted by: Mrs. Nandita Rao At: 7, Oct 2003 5:55:19 PM IST
Good one. Congrats.
Posted by: SriSai At: 7, Oct 2003 5:38:40 PM IST
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