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| Great Story . I wish you all the best
Posted by: BoyWithoutAGirl BoyWithoutAGirl At: 17, Oct 2003 9:59:24 PM IST
kadha baagundhandee eeswar gaaru
Posted by: Mrs. Aruna At: 12, Oct 2003 4:32:58 PM IST
Hi,
You style resembles that of Sri Mullapudi Venkata Ramana, and I like that. Certain slang words like AVVUDDHI should have been avoided (and should have been replaced by words like AVUTHUNDHI). Today's writers (I don't want to mention names) have spoiled the language so much that it is nice to see you use the words like DARIMILAA (meaning Afterwards), SADARU (meaning Related to), YAEHYAM (meaning Disgusted), TILODAKAALU (meaning To give up).
Regards,
Sankar
Posted by: Mr. Sankar Tadinada At: 12, Oct 2003 11:30:00 AM IST
chala bagahvunadi.. good..
keep it up..:)
Posted by: Mr. Baava Garu At: 12, Oct 2003 9:53:35 AM IST
I think story title should be "SNEHAM KOSAM" instead of "PREMA KOSAM"
Emantaaru ESWAR gaaru?
Posted by: Mr. chaitu choudary R At: 12, Oct 2003 2:42:26 AM IST
Hey Eswar,
Mee story daddrillindi...... rechchipondi...
Looking for more and more stories from you!!
Thanks a lot!
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 11, Oct 2003 1:49:24 AM IST
very nice story
Posted by: Mr. Joseph At: 10, Oct 2003 11:18:41 PM IST
ISwar baagundi mee annaaraav mariyu chinnaaraav la kadha.. kaani tElchesaaru anDi .. vasanta gaariki marI chOTu lEdu kadha lO ..
Posted by: బుజ్జిది At: 10, Oct 2003 7:39:41 PM IST
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