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| NEE AVEDHANA ARTHAM CHESUKOTHAGINDHE
KANI KAVITHA ANTE BHASHA SOUNDARYAM KANI LEKA POTHE BHAVASOUNDARYAM GANI UNTE INKA BAGUNTUNDI.
mahakavi sri sri ila annadu;
" KAVITHA PUTTADHU OORIKE KANTIKI NEEROSTE TAPPA.
KADALIPOGADOORIKE KANNITIKI HOROSTHE THAPPA".
ANY WAY RAYA DANIKI PRAYATNICHARU GOPPE.
Posted by: Mr. RAMESH VEMULA At: 11, Sep 2002 4:37:06 PM IST
Umm i am not discourrizing u.but no where i felt this as a poem.Its like a statements.Sorry if i hurt.but its my opinion even i dont have much knowledge in english
sreeni
Posted by: Mr. M.S.Reddy At: 6, Sep 2002 8:10:39 PM IST
no rhyme, no rhythm
just plain statements
very pain statements
out of hurt.
Feelings are understandable.
Please try to put them in a more good way.
Sorry I am not good one to criticise, but I want to share my opinion frankly.
Anticipating good poems from you.
Please take this comment sportively.
-Prasanthi.
gudiyaji@myguruonline.net
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 5, Sep 2002 10:59:27 PM IST
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