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Articles: Poetry | | Usha Kiranaalu | |
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| hi,
mee kavithalu chadivanu
meeru baavukatha wrayali anukontunnari kaani.. adi antha sari ga wrayatam ledu.
mee padala koorpu chala sadaranam ga vundi..
edo cheppalani aaratame kaani.. kavitha ni oka pravahama laga cheppe shaili meeku ledu.
mee kavitvam B grade lo vundi meeru inka improve chesukovali...
Posted by: Haroon At: 24, Jun 2003 0:14:58 AM IST
naveen garu,
modati prayatnam antoone ila danchesaarentandi.(ante inta baaga raasaru ,ani)good luck.expecting more of this kind
Posted by: Mrs. Sree At: 20, Sep 2002 2:46:24 PM IST
Ayya baboi... hurt avaledu em ledandee babu. choodandi... lempalesukuntunnaa...
:))) ee okkasaariki kshamincheyyandi please....
meerartham chesukunnadi exactly correct(btw, naku kaluva poolante chala ishtam)
Naveen
PS: annatlu, kavi definition baavundandoi...
Posted by: Mr. Naveen Kumar Namboori At: 15, Sep 2002 11:24:25 PM IST
Hello Navven garu..
Hurt ayinattunnaru, meeru rasina danni patti chuste. Nenu vimarshinchaledu. Ardham kaledu anduke adiganu. Manasuloni bhavalu kagitam meeda andaru pettaleru. Aa bhavalanu bhavayuktanga pette vade kavi. Tana manasuloni bhavalanu eduti valla manasu varaku cherchi kadilinche vadu kavi. Adi andariki radu. Mee bhavalu bagunnai. Nenu mavulu manishini. Mee kala hrudayanni ardham chesukovadam koncham kastamindi.
Chandamama kanapadagaane virise kaluva
thanani jaabili pilichedaaka aaguthundaaa?
kallu cheppukune oosulaku noti maatalu avasaramaa?
chevulaku vinabadakapothe asalu shabdhame ledantaava?
jabili cheppadam kosam eduru chudadu, kaluva jabilini chudagane vikasistundi ana ardham. Naku ardham kaledu, anduke adiganu.
Posted by: Ms. Tanvi K At: 15, Sep 2002 2:51:59 PM IST
:)))
Tanvi garu,
naku kopamendukandee... Mee abhiprayam vyaktam cheyyadam mee janma hakku (Talibanized Afghanistan kakundaa inka vere ye prajaaswamya desham citizen ainaa kudaa ) kevalam nakosam raasukunte ilaa publish enduku chestaanu? Naa bhaavaalu okarniddarinaina kadilinchagaluguthaaya anna sandehaanni teerchukodam kosame andari mundu unchuthunnaanu.
Naa bhaavulu nakunnatle mee bhaavaalu meevi. Kaadanenduku evarikee hakku ledu. Kakapothe oka vishayam. Tilak annatlu "padaala koorpu kavitha kaadu". Nenu padaalato gaaradee cheyyalenandi. Manasunu paper meeda pedithe daaniki rythm anni chotlaa undakapovachchu. Prathi bhaavam andarikee artham kaakapovachchu. Prathi kavithalonu antho intho obscurity thappani sarigaa untundani naa nammakam. Endukante andari oohaalokaalu exactgaa overlap avavu kadaa. The intersection of your and my imaginary worlds brings the commonality and the thrill of discovering 'those feelings which we share', while the rest of them bring out the differences.
Naa abhiprayam meeku kopam theppinchi unte kshaminchandi. Edi emainaa, mee vimarshaku, prasamsaku naa hrudayapoorvaka krutagnatalu.
itlu
Naveen
PS: I believe that poem can only be copied from your heart to the paper.... and it cannot be improvised.... 'coz once you improvise, it is no more from your heart.
Posted by: Mr. Naveen Kumar Namboori At: 15, Sep 2002 12:16:43 PM IST
Hi Naveen garu,
Namaskaramandi. Mee kavitalu chadivanu. Kavita le kadu, dani venuka dani venuka bhavam kuda chala bagundi.
Cheliya cheliya chiru kopama - Bhale bagundi.
Usha kiranalu - chala bagundi.
Kakapote Nishbda geetam - Mee idea bagundi kani sarigga kurcha leka poyaremo anipinchindi. Kottodu ila annanani :( Modati rendu charanalu bagunnai. Mudo charanam first 2 lanes link asalu ardhame kaledu. Nalugo charanam mugimpu charanam mugimpula ledu. Anni prasnalato rasalu adi kuda alage muginchalsindi. Vaddulendi, kopma vachestundi.. ee kavita lo flow ledu.
Posted by: Ms. Tanvi K At: 15, Sep 2002 5:11:55 AM IST
Baagaane undandi. nice. very different expression for Sunrays.
Proceed and make us feel those wonderful feelings and let us walk through the world of your imagination.
Chinna suggestion andi. Your ray among the rays of Sun should always be present along the way(of life), and it should not only intend to brighten the room but the heart too. Then your friend will feel happiness always.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 10, Sep 2002 0:23:57 AM IST
Naveen garu, na peru meeda ee kavita raasinanduku chala thanks andi. just kidding.
Posted by: Jonnalagadda Jonnalagadda At: 9, Sep 2002 10:13:33 PM IST
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