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avunu meekevarikayina....murali mohan mallareddi emayyaDo telusaa? Tp ki konni rojula kinda vacchi mayamayina..oka adbhutamayina vchana kavi :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 5, Nov 2003 9:21:10 PM IST
acknowledged !
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 4, Nov 2003 7:49:10 AM IST
nageshwar rao garu. mee abiprayam tho nenu ekibavistunannu...kani..mee vimarsha nishkarshagaledu..vimarshinche daggara mohamatalu aakkarledu sir. VIMARSHAni possitive ga tisukunvadu ratu deli inka baga rayagaluguthadu...any way meeku naa abi nandanlu................ bye urs....siddu
Posted by: Mr. chandra mohan At: 3, Nov 2003 1:30:15 PM IST
chinna correction 25th line
meeru JOKING ani word add cheyakundaa vundi vunte mee vyaasam andharoo chadivi happy feel ayyevaallu ..
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 3, Nov 2003 1:17:53 PM IST
mee vyasam baagundhi kanee
mee vyaasam paina naa abhipraayaalu panchukundaamani oka chinna prayatnam ..
thappugaa bhaavincharani manavi ...
"vimarsinchataniki koodaa arhatha sampaadinchaleni kavithalu" ani raasaaru ..
oka 2 years chinna pilla vaadu pichi geethalu geestaadu ..vaadiki adhe mahadaanandham ..
4 years pilla vaadu telugu aksharaalu vankara tinkaragaa raayagaladu ..vaadikadhe prapanchaanni jayinchaanu ani anipistundhi ..
but mee(mana) laanti pedda vaalla drustilo avi pichi geethalu vankara aksharaalu ..
so meeru vaalla level ki velli(vaalla view lo) aalochinchandi .. krotthagaa kavitha raasevaallu mari great "sri sri " mahaprastaanam laagaano maro vidam gaano raayaleru ..so palaana kavitha arhatha sampaadinchataaniki ledhu ani elaa chepthaarandee meeru ??
ilaa raasi vunte baagundedhi ani mee laanti vaallu vaallanu guide cheyandi anthey kaanee alaa discourage cheyoddu ..
meeru cheppina sridhar ,chandrasekar,satyam(ofcourse naaku evaroo theleedhu) ...inkaa evarainaa kaavochu ..vaallu koodaa okka kavithathone antha famous aiporu ..pichi kavithalu (vere vaalla drustilo) raasi eeroju yee stage ki vachi vuntaaru ..ani naa abhipraayam ..thappu aithey kshaminchaali ..
tp.com emee kavithalaku ISI mark vese place kaadhu ..so kavithalo stuff vundi kavi/kavayitri lo vishayam (stuff) vunte vaallaku state /central level lo name vastundhi .. kaabatti manchi kavithalani vimarsinche vaaru leru ani baadhapadatam anavasaram ani anipistundhi (naa mattuku)..
meeru enni kavithalaku constructive comments raasaaru .. baagunnavi kaavachu baagolenivi kaavachu ...
chandassu follow ayi raayaaalani expect cheyatam koodaa atyaase avuthundhi .. idhemi serious gaa kavithalu raasi competition ki pampe kavithalu kaadhu .. most of the time ..time pass ki raasinave ..(anukuntaanu)...kaabatti antha worry kaanavasaram ledhanipistundhi ..
inko vishayam ... prema priyuraalu priyudu antoo female ID tho raaste spandhana ekkuva
ani raasaaru ..anthatitho aaagakundaa JOKING ani raasaaru ..ante mee comment meeru nirbhayam gaa nirmohamaatam gaa raayalekapoyaaru ..meeru JOKING ani word add cheyakundaa vundi vunte nenu koodaa mee andharoo chadivi happy feel ayyevaallu ..
mari andharoo koodaa mohamaata paddathilo raastaarani anukogalarani manavi .. manam raaseyatam kaadhu comments ..avatahali vaaru vaatini sportive gaa theesukune vidham gaa vundaali appude comments ki viluva ..
nenu okasaari oka abbaayi raasina poem ki comments raasaanu ..athanu jeerninchukolekapoyaadu .naa kavithaki articles ki evevo chettha comments raasaadu ..but nenu sportive gaa theesukuni voorukunnaanu ..andharoo alaa vundaru ..alaa revenge ani athaniki enu naaku athanu raastoo vunte eppudoo antham kaadhu
meeru koodaa idhi sportive gaa theesukuntaarani thalustaanu ..
Posted by: Mr. Murali Mohan T At: 3, Nov 2003 1:15:25 PM IST
nAgESwara rao gAru, chAlA bAgA vrAsAru. oka sTAMDarD vAriki kottagA tama anubhUtulanu akSharIkarimchE vaari vyaktIkaraNa sahajamugA nachchadu. kAnI vALLalO rAyAlanE tapana uMdi kAbaTTi sarigA vimarsiMchi, chakkagA prOtsahistE tappaka manchi kavulu, kavayitrulu kAgalaru.
A diSagaa mee vyAsaM emtO baaguMdi. ayitE nAdi oka vinnapaM.
mIru OpikagA anni kavitalu chaduvutunnAru kAbatti, AyA kavitalalOni lOpAlu meeru vimarsistE appuDu iMkA ekkuva prayOjanamgA
uMTuMdi.
mI vaMTi vAri nishpAkShika vimarsalu aayaa kavula/kavayitrulaku emtO utsAhAnni ivvagalavu.
marO sAri mI mamchi vyAsAniki abhinaMdanalu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 3, Nov 2003 11:34:32 AM IST
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