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Articles: Poetry | | Prema (Gaayam) | |
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| Prema kanna Gaayam bagundi!!!
Premalo tiyyadanamm oppukunnam. Kaani baadhalo kooda tiyyadanam doubtey! Lekapothey inni hatyalu aatma hatyalu enduku!!!!
Posted by: Mr. venu gopal p At: 6, Nov 2003 11:15:54 AM IST Thanks sreedhar gaaru,
manasulo lo ni manishi ante, manasu ki nachina manishi anna feeling.
Ika Mruti chedani smruti ante, aa jganapakkani nee mansasulo alage brtakanivvu anna feeling Sreedhar gaaru...ante marichipokunda ani..anyway thanks for u r comments and will try to rectify.
Sreedhar
Posted by: Mr. Sreedhar Garlapaati At: 6, Nov 2003 5:21:55 AM IST good one
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 5, Nov 2003 8:53:51 AM IST Nice one Sreedhar gaaru.. Bhavam baagundi.. kaani konni polikalu saripoledu... "Mruti chendani Smruti".. "manasulo manishi ki " ...
Hope i didn't hurt you with my comments..
good luck..
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 5, Nov 2003 2:53:20 AM IST Your poem is very nice Sreedhar.
Inthaki mi cheli ki chupinchaara ee kavitahaaaa...:)
Is this your own write up? :d
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Posted by: Nenu Nenu At: 5, Nov 2003 0:25:28 AM IST Thank you every one for your comments and as well as compliments.
Sreedhar
Posted by: Mr. Ravi Kumar Regula At: 4, Nov 2003 10:51:54 PM IST mimmalni,mee premanu andukoleni aa preyasi yevaro chala unlucky andi sridhargaru.mee badhanantha poemlo choopincharu,simply superb andi....
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 4, Nov 2003 10:10:08 PM IST
SrI kantapaDinappuDu annavu Emi kantapaDinappuDu ?
"migiltE maLLi kalustaanu" annavu Emi migiltE ?
baagundi :) prEma kannaa gaayam adirindi :P
Posted by: బుజ్జిది At: 4, Nov 2003 8:31:20 PM IST 2nd part gaayam chala bagundi.....mansuku hatthukundi andi....superb.....
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 4, Nov 2003 6:55:49 PM IST yup..awesome..especially the 4th,5th and 6th lines of the second poem(gaayam).
nice to see some good stuff like this...
keep posting.
Posted by: sanjana At: 4, Nov 2003 1:08:57 PM IST
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