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| good one.
Posted by: Mr. Satish Kumar Barnala At: 27, Aug 2004 10:11:05 AM IST
viplov ji, I liked some of your other kavithas. This one is also good..say something on this:
1)Idi nidralo narakama leka narakamlo nidraa?
2)Nidralo ulikkipatu...melakuva ochindaa raledaa ? vastey meeru varninchina narakam reality, ledantey idi oka kala anukovali.
3) Veru cheyaleni gurtu pattaleni gontula chitkaralu.....ee line avasaram antaraa?
4) Kalledutey unna santhosham....adee intha narakamlo...??????
Still, good.
Posted by: Mr. venu gopal p At: 7, Nov 2003 12:59:02 PM IST
Hello Viplove garu,
nijamga meeru viplavame theesuku vacchetattu unnaru....
manishi yokka attadugu manasulo nikshipthmaina bhaavalaku akshara roopam kattaru...
meedhantu oka prathyekathanu nirupisthunnaru...good keep it up..
Kani oka vishayam Viplove garu...
ikkadiki vacche memu antha sedhatheeradaniki...
mee andhari kavithala dwaara mimmalni choodadaniki.....ikkada kooda malli tensions pettukomante ituvanti valuable poems ki viluva undadhu..(idhi shlesha maathram kaadhu)
mammalni mee kavithalalo sedha theerustharani aasisthu....
mee kavithalanu abhimanisthunna...
Posted by: Ms. Vani Vani At: 7, Nov 2003 5:05:52 AM IST
Nice try.. Viplove , kakapote kavita ki ending antu emi ledu.. nidralo narakaaniki karanam teliyadledu.. avi kooda vivariste baaga undedi..
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 6, Nov 2003 11:12:44 PM IST
hmmmm...........naku ippudu ardham ayindhi meeru andhuku lonely oo..... i pity U.
Posted by: Ms. Mallika Reddy At: 6, Nov 2003 10:22:07 PM IST
versatality ante nee poetry lo vundi..ade type sutti kavitalu rayakunda.. chala baga rastunnavu..keep it up bud
Posted by: harsitha harsitha32001 At: 6, Nov 2003 10:16:39 PM IST
Viplove..chala chala bagundi...really good..
Posted by: harsitha harsitha32001 At: 6, Nov 2003 10:06:01 PM IST
baaboiiiiiiiiiiii bhayametshundhi chaduvuthuntey...Extreme cruelty gaa vunnayi thoughts.....
medaduki alochana kalpinchedho, manasuki ahlaadaanni kaliginchevo ayithe baguntundhi.....
sorry about this comment....
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 6, Nov 2003 7:38:19 PM IST
naa standard ki ardham kaaledu ;((
but its not like u, Viplove !
Posted by: Narendra Pratap Raju At: 6, Nov 2003 7:18:09 PM IST
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