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| bagundhi andi, kani ekkado shruthi thapputhundhi mee kavitha. Meru project cheyalu anukunna bhavana kanipinchatam ledu. machi bhavayukthikarana anedhi chala avasaram anukunta. emi antaru?
meru aa pathra lo jeevistha kavitha inka baga undedi ani na abhipryam.
Hope you will take it sportively.
Expecting some more good articles.
Posted by: Bharathi Reddy At: 8, Nov 2003 10:56:29 AM IST
simple matalu laaga vunnayi kaani chala depth vundhi anipisthundhi sreedhar garu....
chalaa chalaa bagundhi...kaalam anedhi okaty vundhani, adhi dhennayinaa maripisthundhani, adhe samaadhanamani marchipokandi......very nice....keep posting
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 6, Nov 2003 7:40:52 PM IST
sare, bagundi. kaani kothadanam emundi? ade bhasha ade bhavam! eppudoo prema, viraham, viphalam, vedana, avedana, .........kevalam ivena kavithakarham? kavithalo kothadanam, matallo padunu, bhavamlo lothu kavali sir. inka try cheindi.
Posted by: Mr. venu gopal p At: 6, Nov 2003 10:53:20 AM IST
Raj babai.. yaa u r correct, I too accept this is a prose, or even a set of dialogues. I was imitating a heartbroke guy and yelled some dialogues in hindi and my roomie said, that got depth, so i translated, added some more lines and posted. Will try better.. This is what i need from you guys, elvate my mistakes so that i can be better...thanx :)
Katti pattina vaadu kadanaaniki...
Kalam pattina vaadu vimarshiki.. ennadu bhayapadadu...
Thanx for the support guys.. esp PTO and Kris.
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 6, Nov 2003 0:30:28 AM IST
chappa ga vundi....dialogues ki and vachana kavita image ki madhya kottumittadutunnattunnayi vaakyalu...sooti ga tagile bhavam ledu basha ledu:)
Posted by: Saleem At: 5, Nov 2003 9:27:11 PM IST
sree maaama...
kavitha ki title ilaa pettalsindi
prEma anukunnaa, kaani....
kavita vraayaali anTe kavi avvaalsina avasaram lEdu. alaage anubhavam kooDaa unDaalsina pani lEdu...
I like this line: (Tit for Tat)
chappuna egasina aavESam ninnEdO cheyyamandi...paga teerchukOmandi..
Posted by: Rajesh At: 5, Nov 2003 7:31:05 PM IST
chala chala baagundi sridhargaru...
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 5, Nov 2003 6:47:42 PM IST
Mr. Sukumar, I agree with you although I feel you have used slightly harsh langauge. I would like to appeal to all these neo-internet-poets to read back their own poetry (or prose whatever)and see if it serves any purpose. It makes no sense to misuse the free webspace with listless and unending tales of lovelorns. It is really disgusting to read all these artificial sufferings and moanings. You cannot take the readers for a ride. Dont take it for granted. There will be critics too. Moreover, why not use your free time for some other useful work. No one is impressed with this kind of stuff. Please spare the web. Yours sincerely
Posted by: Mr. pvg p At: 5, Nov 2003 2:50:34 PM IST
Vachaspati gaaru.. meeku cheppenta peddavanni kaadu...but naa drustilo deni gurinchaina kavita rayalante anubhavinchalsina avasaram ledu.. oka chinna feeling chaalu.. ila untundi anna ooha chaalu... leda anubhavistunna valla to naalugu kshanalu gadipina chaalu..
Sukumar.. mee kalpana shakti ki joharlu..
"Aavesham kanna alochana goppadi" .. "Pasaleni maatakanna mounam goppadi".. Hope you got what i meant..
And rest thanx for the comments.. :)
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 5, Nov 2003 11:38:49 AM IST
could not beleive this ! meelo chaala aavedhana vundhi !
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 5, Nov 2003 9:02:28 AM IST
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